Reviews for A Penny For Your Thoughts

ImortalFalcon 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseHey, I like this story. You started it with a pretty solid foundation. The emotion you evoked fits the bill and the crews feelings after the wake of ashley's death. I see you also had a shower scene, very nice (why didn't I think of that?!). Also the peck Shepard gave on Joker's cheek is intriguing, I'd like to see how that unfolds. A few misspellings but that isn't a big factor in my world, as long as the thought and passion of the writer is there that is all I feel is important. Looking forward to the next chapter.
The Fico 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abusepotential, I see POTENTIAL!! Just some spelling errors, but it's good so far.
Lilliwyn 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is a good start! I noticed a few misspellings, but you're not the only one who has that problem from time to time. ;) I really like the way you wrote the dialogue. Good job! :)