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| A.M. Richardson 2008-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseI very much like the way you captured their characters via their speech and this had me: Her godfather brought her a Blackberry," she went on. "What for… to make a bloody crumble?" HAHAHAHA!! And he tossed her frozen peas... awe :D |
| nonsenseandmischief 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAfter my initial "eww, Evan!sex" shock, I really enjoyed this fic. Well thought out, and well written, and even better for the fact that a) she doesn't *really* like Evan and b) Gene is so lovely :) xx |
| Gem6 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw I love it, didn't want that chapter to end at all!! Will there be another chapter? Gem x |
| Siggy 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseFantastic stuff, you caught the characters completely. Favourite lines: "These seats are a bugger to clean" "More jam tart than posh tart" More stories please |
| onebyone 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, write more please! |
| Funky In Fishnet 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was love, a really nice understated way to end the fic. Liked how Evan defending a child killer made her question her reliance on him and how sleeping with him made her feel kinda queasy. Good job :- ) |
| ladyoinored 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseGood, carry on! |
| Luckysparkle 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI love this. So very much. I really hope you add more soon! :D |
| FirstDraft 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellent stuff (I hope just the start!), nicely understated. I'm not sure I can quite believe she would sleep with Evan, especially as it's been established he raised her, but the dynamic with Gene rings very true. |