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Reviews For: Kalm after the Storm

monitorscreen
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseCute and comfortable. I like Vincent's house here :-) And the bit near the end about all of them having been worried is touching. A nice read.
Jamaica
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseHoly crap this is awesome!! I don't see many Vincent Cloud friendship fics, especially not with a Vincent who's content with his life. Great job! I hope you write more!
Mengde
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseI got your message and as you've been such a superb reader of mine I was of course more than happy to return the favor. The story was an interesting take on Vincent, which I liked. I did wonder after DoC what kind of family history Vincent might have, but assumed that it had been all lost after his sleeping in the coffin. Your addition of a heritage for him is nice.

The characterization of Cloud was good, and while Vincent isn't what I normally see it's obviously because he's on the road to recovery and is becoming a normal human being again. It was easy to believe how you presented him and very smooth. The prose was good, no complaints there. Overall, it was a good read and I hope you'll consider writing another sometime.
maliciousqueen
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very well-written story, quite untypical (nice idea about the father's mansion). I like how you kept the characters in check (especially Cloud,his thoughts were hilarious).

I look forward to other FFVII fanfics you may create. You show a lot of promise. =D
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