|Reviews for The Ebb and Flow|
| 000000oooooo00000000 4/3/08 . chapter 6
Wow, I can't believe they're going to be together (hopefully). Was she just upset about her breakup with Dean, or was there something else going on?
| paula lvarez Moledo 4/3/08 . chapter 1
I never make reviews but i have to say you are writting one of the best fanfics i'ver read you got me addicted, and the fact that everyday i come home i have a new chapter waiting to be read makes it all even better
thank you so much for writting this, keep up the good work!
| smartprettyawkward 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I loved this chapter! I thought it was good they had a fight, all friends fight- the fact that it was over Rory going to NYU was realistic. And I loved the ending, of course! Thanks for updating so quickly, I'm off to read your notes on your forum! :)
| kisstommyq 4/3/08 . chapter 6
yay! i loved it! pmasap!
| dazedandconfuddled 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I'm so glad they finally saw it! Finally they are together. I'm so happy...I'm so happy! They are so cute together. I'm also glad that they went into this relationship this time with no regrets or hesitations (like you said at the end).
Please update soon. Your writing is impeccable.
| Krista 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I just sat down and read your story from beginning to end (well so far). I like the anticipation you are creating with the slower pace even though it's driving me a little crazy. But, that's good right? I especially liked this passage: "She sighed and absorbed the feeling of him. Where she was soft, he was hard. His stomach, chest, legs, and sex." It's original and sometimes it's hard to find originality in sex/love scences. But you are doing a good job! Please keep up the frequent posts coming )
| ggfan 4/3/08 . chapter 6
Yay! Can't wait to see what you have planned next!
| ShaolinQueen 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I love the changes in this chapter and too bad they slow down, you write the sex/love scene wonderfully!
| Lynn 4/3/08 . chapter 6
Amazing! Loved it!
| Ang 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I'm so excited to see how this all goes, yay! haha..
| XxXDrama QueenXxX 4/3/08 . chapter 6
aw! YAY their together, please update soon:)
| Just A Girl Of The Hollow x3 4/3/08 . chapter 6
AH! LOVE IT!
| frequentlydazzeledbylit 4/3/08 . chapter 6
OMG! i am soo hapy. you wrote it really very well. nice job! i didnt expect the NYU school for her at all! update soon!
| Qzilonmomscomputer 4/3/08 . chapter 6
Ohh, I really like it, but are they together now or what? Thanks for spoiling us with an update a day!
| hijinx400 4/3/08 . chapter 6
I, too, was expecting the sex scene but felt relieved that you didn't follow the "expected" route. So many M-rated stories don't follow a realistic path in the sex department - the first time their tongues touch, they get naked. If it was a one-night stand? Then yeah, that would be realistic. But you have taken the care to evolve their relationship over a number of years, and with evolving definitions - it wouldn't have seemed quite right that they got naked and had sex the very MOMENT they crossed over from platonic to way-more-than-friends. I tend to think they have too much respect for each other to jump into bed right away...but of course, I'm looking forward to it when it finally DOES happen. I'm extremely curious as to whether or not this Rory is still a virgin ;)