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| Marshpaw 2008-06-23 ch 11, anon. | abuseLolz |
| blueskiesahead 2008-05-21 ch 11,  | abuseMan, oh man was this funny! There most certainly should be a sequal! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-16 ch 11, | abuseThis chapter was so funny I can't even specify... ah, well. Poor Russetfur... I mean, poor you!! TOo bad it's over - I was really enjoying this one. But you wrapped it up pretty well, except the the ShadowClan cats probably think bicycles aren't "masculine" enough, either. |
| WaRrIoRs 2008-05-14 ch 11, anon. | abuseluved it... PLLZ make a sequel |
| Hawktalon 2008-05-14 ch 11, anon. | abuse... AWESOME~! |
| Cmd. Gen. Marasco 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseNot to nitpick, but how do the cats drive if the cars(or monsters or whatever) are built for humans? |
| Dewkit 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseWho's Bezza? Make a squel! |
| Nightclaw 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseI think that has to be the best humour story I've ever read! Lol! Hilarious. I didn't quite get who the black tom was though. Was it meant to be Blackstar? I can't think of any other shadowclan black toms at the moment. Please please write a sequel! |
| The Pink Twinkie 2008-05-12 ch 11, | abuseThere must be a sequeal! I wanna see what happens with Hollypaw. xD |
| :: Swiftstar ~ Echosong :: 2008-05-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseHa ha... ha ha ha... I could barely stop laughing! Do a: Warriors Bicycling Lessons! And make ShadowClan, RiverClan and WindClan all recruit kittypets from Twolegplace and then all the Clans have kittypets to help them learn to sneak and borrow - cough cough i mean steal cough cough - and resize the bicycles to make them small enough to control! Snigger... SwiftStar / EchoSong |
| Leafecho 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseAwesomely awesome! What is it with me and the word 'awesome'? No idea! But oh well! My dad owns a red Volvo too! And a gray one! And a white one! We're obsesses... The red is called The Brick. The gray is called The Gray Lady and the white is called Domino... You see, my sister thought it looked like a sugar cube, so we named it after the sugar producing company (in those little packet thingies)... I had too much ice cream... again! Anyway, randomness! Can't get enough of it! Nor can I ever get away from it! ~Lefy=)=)=)=)=)=) |
| Anabel of the Battle Tower 2008-05-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseI love this story, and you have to end it? NO! But on the other hand, it must be a very acompleashed feeling that you finished a story. and you said you would make a sequel, so I hope you do. Please. Well anyway, its a awsome story, and I don't think anybody would NOT like this one. Great Job! |
| Lightkit 2008-05-04 ch 10, | abuseThis is awesome. SO FUNNY! Update soon! Luv, Lightkit |
| Dewkit 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abuseWhat's a commentary? Why is Hollypaw so... |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-03 ch 10, | abuseHeh... okay, now you just hafta do the race across the lake... I suggest Stormfur as the driver, because he used to be a RiverClan cat. *smacks forehead* Sigh... apprentices... |