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| MajorKris 2008-04-12 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed this story, thanks for putting it up. Garrus is my favorite character in the game, and it was a fun read. I loved the little moments Shepard and Garrus had, it was cute. :) |
| brokenpassions 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseBrillent, I was on this mission, but never got to do it because it was due before I could. Garrus was always my favorite! Love the slight pairing thing you had going on. |
| PsiSquirrel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusegreat story, long, accurate and engaging |
| Wyvern Rider 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Great job :3 |
| xboxgeek 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written! :) Love garrus by the way |
| blackrogue123 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseHeh, that part at the end with Garrus having to do all of that rethinking made me laugh. Well, I can't really say anything that the other reviewers haven't, so I'll keep it simple. I think you did a really good job with this fic! |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI really like the spin you put on it. It was a great adaptation of the scene. That's one of my favorite parts of the game, and it would have been even better if it had gone that way. Have you thought about writing another chapter? |
| Blackheart Syaoran 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery good. |
| KSCrusaders 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was adorable. I liked how you upped the tension in the Dr. Saleon sidequest--I'd always thought that could be more dramatic than it was in the game, and you captured the truly gross elements very well without being terribly graphic. As a minor quip, Ashley seemed a teensy bit out of character when she was arguing with Garrus. I know she's blunt, but I don't think she'd deliberately accuse him of goading Shepard. And Shepard might crack down on them a little sooner. Other than that, this was very good! Looking forward to more from you! |