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| Delylah 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseLoved it...I hope you'll continue it. |
| Jaquant Umbru 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseyuo mak teh jerman natzie naem trorn an is teh SCUK! That all, btu oen day yuo can bee like ME! Sinseer- Jaquant Umbru (teh bsest countar-stark!1) |
| DhtrofIsis 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWell written and exciting. I enjoyed this little backstory. While I think it stands fine on its own it'll be interesting to see where you take it next. The only thing that bugged me a little was Toombs' rank. He's a corporal in the game. My impression was that after Akuze he was captured and made a lab rat. After he escaped he went on his vengence trip. I think if he had resurfaced Shepard would have know about it. Other than that it was a great story. |
| magooglersriot 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good story. I also liked Jennifer Hale as Shepard, she did bring life into the character. Anyway, I hope you will continue this, good job.=] |