it feels really...forced...and your kinda right...my eyes are stinging...gomen

o_o i just got on a roll for reading and then there wasnt any more o_O r0o needs you to update! - r0o

great story! hope you update again soon!

hurry and update

Alright Kakashi, I'm reviewing I can't wait to see you bring the Naruto characters back into the picture.

FT

M .. well it was sort of a ramble-on chapter. I noticed a number run-on sentences. Such as your last paragraph, there's like, what, 2 sentences there?

About Shippou, yeah that's true. I feel so bad for the poor kid sometimes.

I'm just glancing back to the top of hte chapter now and noticed the whole 'seven hells' part. I wonder, where did the whole seven hells thing come from? As far as I know, there's one hell. End of story, I never understood that.

Great chapter, update!

still really good! please update when you get the chance...

hey thanks for updateing loved it lol

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Kagome should be with either Naruto, Gaara, or Sesshomaru. Couldn't sess bring Zabuza & Haku back with Tensaiga?

No, of course you couldn't keep Miroku's curse! Kagome as a half-demon ... interesting. I've always wondered how old Shippou was in the actual anime/manga since he seemed so young but in another sense was so mature...

Anyway, I'm good. You shouldn't use notepad, it doens't pick up your mistakes. You should use Microsoft Word. For me my thoughts are usually faster than my fingers even though I play piano too. What level of piano are you in?

Anyhow, good chapter. Update!

hey loved it so update soon k bye

great chapter

still good! please update when you can...

Great Story

I liked it, nice ending to the chapter too! Still some spelling and grammar errors here and there but nothing too big. Keep it up!