A good oneshot, I really liked your description. Not too much, but you made a very good mental image. A little too sweet for a Snape fic in the end, but despite that I was very entertained. ^^

Graet job!!

<3 this story. totally ** hot and sweet at the same time

hm wonderful.

It hard to find a story I really like with this couple but you did it.
Awesome!

M...delicious!

MissyakaLovesRickman

really good

i loved it!! there are no more words to say how much i adored this. it went well with the two songs i listened to. :giggles: nicely done. such a fluffly ending.

:-)

wow, that was intense and well written.