It's nice to see a Nevva/Telleo fic out here in ye olde Pendragon section. I think it's a very deep story that needs to be explored, and while you didn't delve entirely into the whole issue of living multiple lives you managed to convey Nevva's personal feelings about it. I like how Bobby is described as both young and old, and how the two of them discuss such a universal issue - love. All in all, I really enjoyed this story.

One thing about your summary is that you might consider getting rid of the definition of Inter Vivos. It almost cheapens it as a title. Let the reader discover the meaning on their own, if they wish, and then make their own connections as such.