I am truly glad I found such an interesting and exciting story. I can't wait to see how it all comes together. :)

I love this story! It's the first SFSS I have ever read, but I love it! *__*

Keep up with the good work. :)

Well-written and thought out. I'm glad to have stumbled across this story and look forward to reading more :)

I love this story, and look forward to more of it, when it comes. Well done.

Aww, that was a good chapter. You write very well, and this story really has me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for another chapter, hopefully college will be gentle to you(it's murdering too many of our souls as it is).

:) Thanks for another great chapter!

Hey there; a nice chapter. Normally I prefer to begin reviewing at the last available chapter, but I caught something that you might want to look into:

“It’s funny, really,” he said suddenly. “Everyone scrambling around trying to figure out where this one mech came from. You would think a simple answer would be easy to find, but….” He chuckled. “You know, if the idea was not ridiculous, I might believe you were Starscream from an alternate reality.” Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 !-- /* Style Definitions */ , , {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.01pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} 1 {page:Section1;} -- He looked back to the seeker, expecting a sneer or a snarky remark, but the silent, blank red stare he received in return made him wonder if it was really so impossible."


Microsoft word went bonkers in that paragraph. xD


Anyway, good chapter and I'm getting excited about the plot, especially with the talk of alternate realities running about. :) Great job, can't wait to read more!

Oh Skyfire - you really try to make it easy for you, huh?
It's not that simple and I wonder what you will do when you're finally ready to accept this.

So, I guess Skyfire is partly able to feel what is happening to Screamer in the other dimension?

Percy is a good guy in his weird, stumbling, a little anticlimatic way. I will never share any obsession about him, but I admit that he can have his moments and this was one of them. Even if I personally think, that, like I stated before, they are making the things to easy and try to get rid of any guilt and things they just should do because it's right.

Well, until next time,
BR

Whee! Update! Yay!

That said, this new bit is brilliant. Perceptor is doing what his name says, even if he doesn't have the words for it, and Skyfire gets it all wrong, but also distracted *whew*.

Also, I wonder at Skyfire's odd pains. *cackles gleefully* If it is what I believe it is, the possibilities for drama have increased exponentially.

;_; so sad! Poor skyfire he is so confused...

Whoa. Here's a lot of thinking... Good, good. I belive there will be an another update, hopefully in time?

So some of the pieces are coming together on this side of the gate now. Most interesting theory, that is for sure.

Skyfire seems to be living with some denial. I have a suspicion about that chest pain, but don't want to jump to conclusions just yet. Looking at it from another angle, one could say that Starscream, in a way, was able to stop Skyfire from doing something he'd possibly regret. Nice chapter and I will be looking forward to seeing what Skyfire decides.

lol, Skyfire's awesome! ^^ anyways, awesome fic! I love the idea of Starscream in another universe/reality. I'm looking forward to what Starscream and Skyfire come up with and i'm really looking forward to when the 2 Starscream's finally meet. ^^ please update soon. ^^

Devious Starscream is always interesting. And it seems like things are finally starting to get going on their side. I have to admit though, I'm getting curious about what is going on "back home" with Skywarp, TC, and Skyfire; also wondering if the Autobots have figured out Perceptor's device didn't work like they expected.

The dialogue got kind of cute at the end. :) It made me want to go "aw."

So short! D: