I'm finally leaving a review after reading this story years ago. The story is amazing, it's been two years since you last updated. I hope you finish the story, keep it coming.

awesome. The plot is wonderful!

ok I know that this review might very well be pointless but I'll say it anyways. I feel as if there are too many translations. I didn't decide to read the story because I thought it would be a good lesson on how to learn japanese nouns. I began to read it because it seemed interesting, the plot seemed interesting. But with all the romaji it takes away from the story even with the translations right next to it. And yes in some stories the romaji does add to the stories reminding you again that the setting is in Japan, but here you might have gone over board. I feel like I have to read the sentence, read the translation, then read the sentence over again to actually get the full meaning. Also I do not know if this gets better with the following chapters but I guess I'll see.

I really wish you would update soon PLEASE! You are an amazing write and a I love this story

I love your story. Even though my eyes are sore in reading, I continue until I finish everything!

PLEASE PLEASE GIVE AN UPDATE. :D

Nice story3 can't wait for the next chapter!

i hope u wright again soon i love this story

hope all is well

ja-nee

OMG!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Great chapter, I hope Sesshoumaru make an appearance soon, please update soon.

hmm..when will sesshoumaru make an appearance?

this story should have over 600 reviews!

so..it's inu papa!

“Keh. Proud.” He allowed himself a small mocking laughter. “Have recent events not taught you that your pride will only get others killed?”

lol, so that's where inuyasha gets it from

arghh! who is the inu taisho?

hm..sesshomaru?

hmm, really interesting way to start your story :)

i like it!

Thank goodness, the hole concept behind a story is just that,it is a story. It is not suppose to be like the anime or manga. Characters are not suppose to be like there Anime counter parts.