Ah! Cliff hanger! Well, I really like this story and I'm a bit apprehensive because you haven't updated it in a long while. I have to admit, usually I don't read stories that haven't been updated for a long time. But this story grabbed my attention. You rarely see any Jareth/OC on here; it's always Jareth/Sarah even thoughits most likely that she'd never want to see him again. Anyways, I'm rambling again. Please update soon! BYEZZ! P.S. I hate peaches and animal crackers rock. ~Shadow

Ahahaha!
See I'm that way too...only I love jareth! I still woulf try not to put that in my path tho...

Love the story!
Update soon!

LOL! I LUV THIS STORY! Why does he wear tights? *Ponders*

I'm so sorry to see you go on hiatus for now. I hope you come back soon now that NaNoWriMo is over. I am interested to see where this goes. I hardly ever read Jareth/OC fic but this one is pretty good. Thanks for writing it and sharing. -Clare

Ugh... Poor Elisa. I'm enjoying her misery way too much. Especially the skeletons at the ending... it slightly reminds me of Pirates of the Caribbean.
But just throwing a peach away like that? Seems like a bit of a waste to me. Hm... I love peaches, I really do, and talking about them actually made me kind of hungry.
Anyway, once again a great chapter, and to me one of the best so far!

Nice and very interesting chapter. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

I hate cliff hangers.

Anywho, good luck with NaNoWriMo. I hope you do get around to writing another chapter for this before you get to wrapped up in it.

Ohmuguh! Very funny, "Mr. Tights Guy!"

Ak! Well, she was asking for it, ne? Literally walked right into the trap. lol. I was almost thinking that she was going to end up talking with dragons, as the scene very much reminds me of that first bit of Dealing with Dragons- in the cabin or what have you.

I forgot (since I was cranky last review) to mention that I loved how Elisa was defending Jareth for being a cross-dresser. Had me chuckling quite a lot during my test (the reason for the crankiness)

MOAR HUMOR! ;)

And good luck on the NaNoWriMo! I did it one year and it as awesome. Barely slept or ate... but it was great. Semi-tempted to do it again, but not this year... no time. If this fic is your outlet though, woohoo!

'Ware the song-fic, though. I think you've been integrating the lyrics well, but that can get both really annoying and sort of end up a creative drain if you don't balance it correctly. And if you are going to have lyrics- probably best to cite the song title and artist in the author's notes and mention that they aren't yours.

Your on hiatus? Darn. What is this 50 words you speak of? And why are there corpses on spikes above her? And what was that song she was singing? And why am I askin so many questions?!

You know- I feel like I need to see the movie again. It's been so long and now I'm reading this fan stuffs... don't even remember what actually happened. Just a lot of bad singing, hand-wall things and the ridiculous hair... possibly because I first saw it as a drinking game. Heh.

I think that the two younger siblings should just go help themselves. It seems boring to just be sitting there. Interesting story, though, the humor is pretty good, too. Getting a bit long, though- but maybe I just don't like crazy long adventure stories. Action! Plot twist! /gasp!

Lol- it's his own damn fault for not changing from what he was wearing in the 80s, no? Tights-guy... hehe

Yay!
This is one of the first Labyrinth stories where the main characters was female and didn't do something retarded.
Or Jareth wasn't completely out of character.
;P
Also, it was hard to read pants magic chapter with the kids, because I was laughing so hard I got teary, and I couldn't read through the liquid.
XD
Awesome job, I'm looking forward to an awesome update!
(No pressure)
:)

Yes! You updated and its good. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Audrey...BWAHA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA! ! !

I suppose you're going to have Eliza give a crack at the ol' 'Jack and the Beanstalk' tale.

Until again.