A finely crafted opening to what would promise to be fine ride. So Jack finally sold a car again? Never thought I'd see the day. If his bunny is really gone, perhaps it's time for a trip to the toy store for some sort of replacement in chapter two? Consider a family outing, with Ryan being himself.

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OMG! where's the rest? hehe i liked it, it was cute and real funny.. continue!

WOW to cool!