Funky. :D Sounds like fun!

Huh, this is actually pretty interesting. But one thing - is Sam the brother? or is he the step-dad? When will you update? Do you like waffles? Do you like French Toast? Do-dodo-do, can't wait to get a mouthful!

Ah, sorry ; I'm random and weird.

must have maor! 0: this is interesting and I like Soda, Candy, and Prndel cant's wait to see more.

Aw. I'm so sad this story died. Seemed pretty awesome to me. Although, admittedly, it was awesome in concept, and you expressed the concept, so I'm not sure where you could have gone from here. still, thanks for the read.

*prods meekly with a stick* You have such great stories, but I've noticed several that have been on hold for a while (I refuse to say that they've died). It makes me sad. Not that I can say I'm much better. *sighs* Just, get around to it when you can? Pretty please?

col like it keep goin

:D MORE PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT

Okay, I am just so overly excited by this first chapter that I had to review to tell you how much I appreciated it! _ Totally fun twist at the end! I also reallyreally like your writing style when it comes to an action-filled chapter like this; it's really easy to follow what Sam is doing- I can almost picture him running, hiding behind the shrubbery and stuff. _ Onwards!

Interesting...

Oh, you have no idea how much I love this story. You've taken a stale concept, and then completely revolusionized it; this is fantastic, so please-please-please continue :3

this is such a cool story! :3 Update soon? PLEASE?

This is getting /interesting/. From what little you've shown us of Prndel's character, I can't see him letting go of Sam easily, and Bee certainly isn't going to react well to the earthcons claim on Sam. Prn and Bee's first meeting will be...well, the question of the immovable object and the irresistible force comes to mind. Good Chapter!

This is off to a promising start. Please update ASAP!

Cool story, I like the idea and how you're written it.

I LOVE THIS FIC!