WOW! SO AWESOME AND CUTE AND SWEET AT THE SAME TIME! I LOVELOVELOVE IT.

wow loved it but one thing Kori is spelled with an 'i' not a 'y' also i'm pritty sure that blackfire's engligh name is kom anders

This is an AWESOME story you should write more like this one you really have a good talent and I would love to read more stories that you have made.

P.S. keep up the good work
sicerly,Your #1 fan

This is good. Once or twice you fooled up with the typing, but other than that it excellent!

AW! That's really sweet! I know, I'm review really late, but aging doesn't destrog the qualties in things! XP That is So cute! I wish I had a boyfriend, and he would write an essay on me, or like a poem, or a song... Or something cute and romantic like that! And i normally donn put oneshots on my fave list, I onlt have Hey There Kori, but since this one was so dang adorable, I'm going to! XP Ok. Peace Out!

ILY&G,
RoBiNxStArFiReLuVr

thats SO SWEET!

faNTASTIC job the ending was so sweet!!

Aww! That was absolutely adorable. Great description, and I love those sweet moments you mingled in there. Definitely faving. Keep writing!

o wow! SO AWESOME! this is your best story yet! AWESOME!

ooh, Kryalla Orchid, my friend is in love with all of her stories

kay, onto the review

first off, great name for aqualad and jinx

i liked how you had richard be the one to be the new kid, usually it's always kory, very unique to switch them around

it was so adorable how he kept referring to her as an angel

it was so cute how she saved him from mammoth and then she became his tutor, brillant!

i liked how richard compared kory to an angel and her sister to a fallen angel, that totally fits

the ending was SO cool, i liked how it all turned out to be an essay in the end, and yayness! kory and richard hooked up

i say all in all this story is a giant A+

Compellingly Cute

Hahaha! AMAZING! That's the only thing I can think of to describe it...simply amazing..

Oh! Oh!! That was really sweet, like not in the overly mushy way, but in the way that makes you want to stop and sigh. -sighs-

He deserved that A+, and he deserves Kory, even if he doesn't believe that...

^_^ Loved it,
Royal.

Eve!

I am /loving/ these lovely Rob/Star one shots you keep pumping out! They're like a daily dose of the sweetness, innocence and fire that are Robin and Starfire!

That was really very sweet.

First person really worked for this one, really allowed you to get inside Richard's head.

HA! It was a paper! Oh, if his friends ever find out about that, he's going to get teased something cronic.

Loved it Eve, well done!

And Alfred better be looking after you!

Cheers
Kry