OMG u capture Axel's personality so well! i love the his mom in this story 2! she so funny..can't wait for ur next chapter and btw lots of my one-shots become 2 chapter one shots 2 lol

LOL! Loved the ending!! I hope this WILL get completed (no pressure...) Anyway, going to my favourites!XD

I loved this, when are you thinking of updating?

I'd love to see this continue... :3

** insane! had me laughing all the way with axel's hilarious commentary

for the love of the gods you must continue!

i have never read anything that captured Axel so well before! although, i was a little worried when Riku said that was **. i have no idea where this is going to go! and i like iT! please please PLEASE CONTINUE!

The last line made me lawl.

There were a couple grammatical errors but other than that, it was flawless. :)

Wow, that, was amazing. Really. I was on the edge of my seat. I think you characterized Axel and Riku really well. I like that Riku's sort of innocent, even though he's so full of himself. Some of the hottest sex ever, right here, it is. I also like Axel's Mom, alot. She's really hilarious. Usually fan-made characters just annoy me or ** me off, but I find myself wanting to see her again, she's terribly amusing. I love this fic, I hope you put up the second part soon. ^_^

O.O Awesomeness, much? I really enjoyed this, I hope to see the next part. You described the characters very well! dead for seriousness. I hope u update soon! :)

LMAO!!
that last sentence just made my day! simply amazing!
i like Roxas' text too, i used to text people to wake them up...then i started to ring them!
but aww feel sorry for Riku loving Sora!

This is definitely original! Lol. Axel as a paper boy and then being invited into Riku's house because he's lonely. I can't wait for the next part. ^_^ And where does Riku get off telling Axel he sucks at **? Lol.

...in Axel's mouth, I suppose. :)

Who, sexy! I love your portrayal of characters! -flail of happiness- Yay, I'm eager for the next chap!

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Oh! Very nice!
My favorite line by far was "I ain't exactly de-tented over here."
I am so gonna say that sometime.

Wow, that was great fun! XD I love how you write Axel and Riku, I can imagine their relationship being somehow like this (if ever they have a relationship). I look forward to the next part! :D

that was so funny! axel is so awesome! hehe
can't wait for more! *nosebleeds*