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| brown-eyed cutie production... 2008-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseAW! its really cute! |
| Bec0512 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cute Umm the usual time to wait for a pregnancy test is 3 minutes, but it varies. Just a sugestion, maybe spread out the text a little and check spelling, not that I can talk, my spelling is horrible. Great Job though. :) |
| xlilgalsophx 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseNice :) Good insight to lindsays family :) & how Danny reacted with the baby was cutee ! All i can say is to make it easier to read space it out a bit but apart from that i can think of anything :) LOVES&HUGS! |