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| Dramione-Fan 17 2008-08-24 ch 6, | abuseThat was interesting more please |
| Fibinaci 2008-08-23 ch 6, | abuseOne step forward then two steps back. I was shocked Harry kicked her out, though really she wasnt actually living there. It's not like her keeping secrets or being ungrateful was some new thing. He had a chance to capitalise on solving her necklace problem but then undid all the progress they had made. If I thought he was finally over Hermione and ready to divorce her(is there divorce in WW?) and move on I'd applaud the move, but we know if he had to just seal off their bedroom and move into another room, that's not the case. Hermione must have been an amazing friend, for Luna who had to watch how Hermione's absence hurt Harry, was still willing to not just take her side but meddle so. |
| riegert8 2008-08-23 ch 6, | abuseThis is an Interesting chapter, It nice that Harry talk with Hermione friend Luna. I doubt that Luna is Harry's friend, Luna is right that Hermione went though an lot and Harry hurt her by kicking her out. The biggest thing that I notice that Luna mention was all Harry's fault and none of Hermione's, Hermione has done thing to hurt Harry and it can't be all Harry's fault. But what did Luna think that should do but to pack Hermione stuff since all he knew that Hermione is gone for good, Some people would drop it off at a good will or toss in a dumpster. It nice that Luna has a bond with Hermione that Harry would never have, but I think the problem and end of Harry & Hermione relationship is both of their fault. |
| Dramione-Fan 17 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abusethat was really good please update soon |
| Fibinaci 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abuseI dont think I could be happier being wrong, though I doubt if the attack by the ministry hadn't gone so well they'd be having that conversation, she is at least acting like she is giving up on her revenge and willing to work with Harry on their marriage. It's a start. I'll believe it, when I see her have a choice and choose him, right now it seems like she doesnt have any other options. |
| riegert8 2008-07-26 ch 5, | abuseIt a surprise chapter, I find hard to believe that Harry is married to Hermione and that they were friend just blow my mind. In the last couple of chapter it seem that Harry & Hermione are more like enemy's, but I could understand why Harry has not Divorced her. Harry is or was in love with Hermione and don't matter how much pain she cause him it hard to walk away, but there have to be a time to realize that sooner or later that Hermione and him have to sit down and work out the problem in their relationship ( if you could call that) or end it for it not working. Part me still believe that Harry best choice is to divorced Hermione and work on trying be friend if that even possible, but that Harry will never divorced Hermione for two reason first that may still love her and second it author favorite paring. I think that this a good story even with part I don't like, like that Harry & Hermione don't seem to be friend let alone married. |
| Fibinaci 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abuseJust because this story is about them, doesnt mean their relationship has to be romantic or have a happy ending. Which is good beacuse their is no way now for them to have a romance or a happy ending. Unless the wizarding world has completely different vows, she promised to put him first in good times and bad, forsaking all others, which she has proven she wont or cant do. Rather it seems they will most likely try and kill each other. Especially in this day and age, I dont think anyone would sympathize with someone using terror tactics to right wrongs no one remembers. |
| mike 2008-05-11 ch 4, anon. | abusenew and original plot but the chapters keep getting more and more convoluted, you need to pick a path and go with it, either the harry/hermione reconciliation is the main plot base or her sidelife. It is becoming more and more confusing trying to understand where this story is going when in 4 chapters nothing is even remotely explaind except that h/hr are married. I think you need to focus on the reconciliation first then go into her background/life story first. |
| riegert8 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abuseI do find this to be interesting story, I am not surprise that Hermione is not a conventional housewife. But there are some women that are not the stay at home wife's, What surprise me that Harry was such a good friend that she walk away like he did not matter. At this point in the story I hope that Harry realize that his marriage to Hermione is a failure and he need to end, find someone who would love him and won't leave him. Hermione may had good reason but she had not talk with Harry over a year, it be hard to fix all the pain she caused. Part of me is looking forward in reading more, the other half has doubts how it might turn out. I have no doubt that Harry would never end his marriage with Hermione and more likely would forgive Hermione don't matter the pain she cause, I doubt that she ever feel sorry because is so smart that she make mistakes. |
| Fibinaci 2008-04-16 ch 3, | abuseWow this is new. Hermione a terrorist? |
| riegert8 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abusean interesting chapter |
| The Slayer of Plot Bunnies 2008-04-07 ch 2, | abuseFantastic work so far, I just have to ask, are you trying to make Hermione a sympathetic character? |
| garrett627 2008-04-07 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter keep up the good work I can't wait to see more:):):) |
| garrett627 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI love the story so far keep up the good work I can't wait for more:):):) |
| HARK2519 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely love the story so far! Please update soon! |