This story is really good, you should continue it. I cannot wait to see what happens next with Linc, Michael, Melony, LJ, Autumn and Teddy.

Oh the family drama!! Linc's so mean leaving poor Mel all alone like that. But her and LJ are so damn cute it's insane!! You really dig the step-mommy stuff, huh? :P Seriously though, those two are adorable!!

I still think Linc's a big meanie XD. Him and Michael both!! But this whole plot you're working out is really drawing me in. It has elements of the first season, but you're adding little bits and pieces and making it you're own and it's like WOAH!! XD OMG!! Is the Company coming after Mel and Lj and Autumn and Teddy? IF THEY LAY A FINGER ON TEDDY ILL KILL THEM AL! omg Teddy and LJ at the mall--I smell hilarity!

This was a really good chapter. I loved Michael's line, "for protection look to those you love". That's beautiful man!!
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BTw, I'm really sorry for the crappy reviews. This box keeps popping up and disrupting my typing and it's ** ME OFF!

OMG I love this sotry! Please post more!

Ohmy god. OH MY GOD! :D :D :D :D So much goin' on! First of all, Mel and LJ--um, aw! LJ's such a doll. I'm glad he's not all rebellious and lashing out at his new step mommy. :P Second of all (and you knew it was coming) OMG AUTUMN AND TEDDY ARE HEART! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ Dude, this is SO killer!! And the perfect life, btw. Poor Mel though...she's so worried about Linc. Damn you Linc! WHERE ARE YOU?!! And omg Autumn and Teddy...E! *shameless giggles* You are an evil, evil, evil genius! You know that song "Evil Genius" by The Exies? Yeah, they totally wrote that about you! Yep. I don't know what's cooler...Teddy needing to send Autumn to rehab for her energy drink addiction or Autumn whooping LJ at TNA on the 360!! Ha!! Dude, I love this. Where the hell is Linc now? He's totally missing the party! XD I love this story. Is there a magical fanfiction fairty who can make this come true? Only with more Linc and Mel? :D :D :D

Oh...now this is gettin' good!! You have a sick, twisted, evil little mind there, Betty-sue! And I LIKE IT ALOT! Are you a writer for the show and I just don't know it? :P

I'm not just saying this--you capture everyone, but Lincoln is so perfect. It's like you hired him to star in your fanfiction--XD! I'm serious! I so can't wait to see what direction you take this in. I'm liking this better than the actual show...XD! I feel so bad for Mel, too. She really doesn't know what's she's getting herself into with the BurrFields--they draw trouble like a moth to a flame! ANd do I smell a planeride to Ireland anytime soon? Hmm...wouldn't that be dremy? XD I can't believe you posted one chapter of this, too!! It's like one episode of Prison Break. how the hell long do I have to wait for the next one?!!?!?!?!

OH MY GOD! JOHN MORRISON IS LINCOLN'S ATTORNEY?! AH! :P Sorry, I had to! Seriously, this was the last story I expected an update on but...WOW! I'm so glad you did! Now I totally wanna watch Prison Break. And so much for schmuff anf fluff. What the hell are you planning with this? Lincoln's innocent, now they're being followed...BY WHO? And meeting up with Veronica can't spell good things for Lincoln and Mel's relationship. AT ALL! By the way, you're gonna think I'm just saying this, but you captured Linc's expressions and hyper anxiety and impatience so well! HE's like "hurry up old man!" it's hilarious!! This story is really good. I hope you get into a PB kick and write more on it soon!

Um, aw! Ok, seriously, the interaction between Mel and LJ is TOO sweet!! LJ makes me swoon already so seeing how sweet he is to Mel just makes it all better! I feel bad for Lincoln...I mean, this brings back memories of the first few episodes! How's Michael gonna save Lincoln this time? I WANNA KNOW! TELL ME!...LJ...

AH! OMG, that's so breaturtiful! I love mushy...I can so see Lincoln ooing and gooing over his perfect yard. I bet Lincoln would own a HOME DEPOT. Oh my gosh, this is so sweet...I can believe LJ is gonna be a big bro! *LJ LOVE!* shut up, he's so cute! So...when are you gonna post the next chapters? All mushyness and boobcupping aside(hehe, boobcupping) I really like the idea behind it all. I LOVE what-if scenarios, even though I've never had the courage to write one(cause I'm a **!). Honestly though...I vote for more musyness and boobcupping. But then LJ walks in and is all grossed out. :D I know--I'm sick. Seriously, I'm SO glad I got on the computer tonight so I could read it...I LOVE IT!! Please add more soon...I need alcohol, so Ic an write like this!