Muahahah, I'm avoiding what I'm supposed to be doing in Pulsar Club to read this. >:) And yes! My master plan has come true! >XD I have now read all your non-rated M Kim Possible stories! :D

The only mistake I found was arch-nemesiscoming needs a space between "nemesis" and "coming". And I don't think Wade would say "how's it hangin'?" but I could be wrong.

And, no, no interruptions. XD Let them enjoy their lip time. ;)

Short stories are always fun though. :)

No critiques for this chapter.

Hhaha. Wow Kim, your enemy just kissed you on the forehead and you're left speechless... I wonder why. ;)

Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

...And yes, short stories mean short reviews. ;) Sorry about that. :/

What does Berserker mean? Or is that a misspelling? :?

Anyway; wow. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love how Kim helps Shego up immediately, even though they're supposed enemies. And yes Kim, you DID just think that. ;) We all know you love the feel of Shego's fingers on your lips. I wonder how you'll feel about her lips on your lips. ;)

Can't wait to read more. :D

Oh my gosh! :O I usually don't favorite things after reading the first chapter, but this one got me. Yes Shego, it is getting freaky, but that's because it's like looking in a mirror. ;)

Couldn't find any critiques in this one, but I love how Shego was so freaked out (because she thinks she's looking in a mirror. XD)

the term is accually tonsil hockey and the kiss seemed too fast but im really interested in this story!

o course you sholud carry the scene onn i mean come on plz oh and inish the story im about 8 more chapters lol

Interrupted by the tweebs please. and then shego threatens them to keep their mouths shut. good idea?

?!? well that was quick on Shego's part. ;)
Interrupt, someone should definitely interrupt them. You always need to draw out the seduction more, makes it all the sweeter afterwards.

And a very good story and premise so far! I can't wait to read the rest!

how rude.. XD
you let the story hanging. hahaha!

doy! i love it.
update soon!

great story
i luv kigos
update soon

CLiffhanger... NO...
Pretty pleasse pst the next chapter soon.

Next chappter! >.< Kyahh!

Can't wait to read what going to happen next.

Ooh nice. Very intriguing using a demonic spirit, and past lives I'm assuming. A good start please continue.

Really promising; I love the premise and am really interested in the whole angel-demon side of theology/mythology. Also, your writing style is good, clear and easy to read, and when you say you are no good at describing things, the way you write gives just enough for a reader's imagination to go on, without going into reams and reams on descriptive text; the best way of describing things as far as I'm concerned!