Love it! I'm a sucker for details and I'm so glad you mentioned both of their wounds that they each felt responsible for. And then El kisses her wound...so romantic! Love it! I also love that El is fascinated with Liv's feet. So cute. Next time tell us what color nail polish. ;)

Beautiful! I really like your style! As you can see, I'm going through a lot of your fics in one night. :)

OMG, That was amazing, I loved it

so cute!! i love it.

good job. i like this.

i liked it!

this was a pretty good story, good job.

great, can't wait for ur next story

I thought it was amazing. I loved this. Its one of the better intimate moments of EO I've read!! Definitely deserves a 10/10! =]

Good ending.
Please update soon.

good ending!

I wish this had happened on the damn show. Your attention to detail is wonderful and I love the smut. I also liked how they told each other that they were in love with the other.

what the... weirdly cool

omg i loved this it was very well written...oh and the details...love it love it...please continue

I love it so far!