  anon 3/19/11 . chapter 3 sexy |
 Midnightmoon602 11/16/08 . chapter 3Oh god. what have i just read?
At some part it was really disturbing for me but the rest was fine.
How can i say this.. nice i guess. |
| PKMN Trainer Mike 10/9/08 . chapter 3 hot fic ! I'm liking this fic to much and I really won't mind if it end like this(with ash and may together)! please, give us a update soon! |
| Yami Marik 01 10/7/08 . chapter 1 ASH! Why that horny son of a bi**h! If I ever catch him with May or Dawn again I will rip his head off. Poor Misty I really feel sorry for her. I admit I hate contest shipping and advance shipping and pearl shipping and Ikarishipping. |
| delcatty546 7/7/08 . chapter 2 y did haruka cheat on shuu? anyway, i want an udate soon, kk? |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 4/14/08 . chapter 2 NICE! |
| ValisFan 4/3/08 . chapter 1 I liked this story, I liked all the emotion from Kasumi. Ash is one lucky guy, getting to bang both Hikari and Haruka at the same time, I wish that was me. |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 3/31/08 . chapter 1 nice |
| peonelopie4 3/30/08 . chapter 1 I feel bad for Kasumi and Shuu! Please update soon! Pretty, please? _' |
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