I *demand* request that the next time you write a Kyoya/Haruhi, you put KISSING. And heated action because those two are smexy.

Cheers!

Nice story... a bit rushed at the end.

I like it! Go Kyouya+Haruhi! *squee!*

It very well-written without being OOC, good job of doing that. ^_^ Moar!

I liked it! So cute! XD Love it!

Who needs a fluffy finish when you have an ending like that ?
Class act all the way - i loved it.

Aw, loved it!

I loved it. It's great when characters aren't OOC, which happens a lot with the KyoHaru pairing.

it was a very nice story! I love your writing style XD

out of 5 stars, i give it a million and one

This was so good! I really liked it! :D Keep up the good writing!

I'm glad it didn't end with kissing, because that wouldn't seem right, to me at least. Well written. Thank you for writing.

Aw what a great story! Personally, I think the moment at the end was much sweeter and poignant than any kiss would have been. Your characterization was spot-on, and I really enjoyed it. Keep writing! :]

Who needs a kiss?
This was great writing.
The way your words seemed to flow were...natural.
Really great work.

-applauds-

I hope to read more of your work soon,
-Night.

Oh, but it *was* fluffy. :D In a good, still-plotty way. Anyway, it was a good read and I'm glad to have clicked on this one. ^^

I'm a bit disappointed (no kiss) but then with Haruhi and Kyoya I guess having them kiss is kind of... but still... -_-