Hey Mom!
I don't review very often but it doesn't mean that I don't like your fics. I love them! Great writing as usual.
I can't wait to read your next story.

Hey Ma (can I call you that?).

I'm a bad person, not reviewing every chapter like I feel I should. I honestly love your stories. It's the only thing that's keeping this show and fandom alive. Doesn't it suck that ABC canceled it? I personally loved it.

Well, thanks for writing a great story, along with all your other ones. I'm sorry I have to cut this review short, as we're going to eat soon...

AUTHOR ALERT! BOO-YAH!

Keep writing (SERIOUSLY),
Jake

eh, no big deal. I like the conclusion, though. Your dialog is always so witty.

Its been a while coming, but that was nicely tied up.

Hey! An update!! I've been away and didn't really pay attention to my emails, so I was especially surprised to see this one on there. Loved the part about "maybe just Merde." I'm a little upset with Trooper Nellie, though. I thought she was going to be the hero. Ah well, Rick Dunbar will do, if that's how it's gonna go.

An excellently handled two chapters (sorry, I only just realised I hadn't reviewed 9 as well). I particularly like the way you had Jim putting together the accent and his fighting moves.

Yay! Go Jimmy d'fghter! More PLease Mom?

Oh my gosh! Is this what we call dramatic irony, when the reader knows something that the characters don't? I feel like I should yell instructions at the computer screen, but they can't hear me!

So great to see an update, though. This one is really getting exciting and suspenseful.

Such a treat to have another chapter. I'm enjoying the way the Dunbar brothers are working together in the shed. I feel cold just reading it.

Jimmy on a snow mobile - bring it on. Where will Hank fit?

Man, you've had a prolific few days. Liked this a lot. These Dunbars are a capable family, aren't they. :D

All this BJ inspiration today! I'm getting ready to post, too. But anyway, this one is about you. I'm really enjoying this story, the continued interaction between the brother and the way you've made your characters so interesting. Can't wait for that group hug, though.

Mom, this is riverting. Call in sick, take your annual vaccation, retire to write fanfic - or at least fed us more, more more! Um, please. Oops, manners failing, must try to hide fanfic addiction...

I'm really enjoying your story. I'm glad you're updating it regularly. Your writing makes it easy to picture all the action. Thanks for writing this. I'm looking forward to more.

Mom,
You're writing a lot these days, huh? You're really quite a step above most of us here in your plot and character development. You really should dispense with us lot and make yourself some serious money off of this "hobby."

And we'll buy your books, we promise, if you'd just give us a little something like this every once in a while. Okay?

Beth

Glad to see you're back writing! We know there is a backstory to Jim's relationship with his father, one that wasn't explored on the show. And the teddy bear was a nice touch.