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| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 6,  | abuseGreat story so far. |
| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 5, | abuse**! |
| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseGo Beka! |
| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 3, | abuseGood going. |
| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseKeep going. |
| MaryRose 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseGood start to what promises to be a cool new story. |
| SparklePixie 2008-05-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseMeh, Thalia expects way too much. Though I guess what can you expect. This is a really cool story, I love stories centered around Beka and Thalia, not sure why, but yeah, I do... Oh yeah, and: Cool Update. |
| Yvy 2008-04-29 ch 6, | abuseSmorgasbord, what a wonderful word! I also, love the conection you're making between Dylan and Beka. |
| Katarite 2008-04-25 ch 5, | abuseI haven't reviewed for a while, but I am still reading this story, and I enjoy it a great deal. Keep up the good work! |
| Yvy 2008-04-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseGood chapter as always. But the fact that she's always smiling creeps me out slightly... |
| Mudfoot3 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really love your story. Your grammar and word useage needs work however. You get your tenses mixed up and use words inappropriately. Maybe a Beta Reader would help. But do continue writing! Once you clean up these minor flaws your stories will be fantastic. |
| Yvy 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseTrust 'Becky' to snap- also I like the similarities between the Thalia and Beka, the relationship between the two is good and not just blind hate on Beka's part. |
| Yvy 2008-04-04 ch 3, | abuseDylan seems rather protective today... Very good update although Dylan should definitely get that wheeze checked out- it's not healthy. |
| Katarite 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love the way you portray Beka and Dylan's relationship in your stories. I can totally see a scene like this happening in the series, and hear her mirth after it's done. Great job! |
| Yvy 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseHaha brilliant! And I can't wait for the Thalia part- that should provoke some strong reactions... |