i didn't think the ending was crappy or cheesy or whatever. you wrote this short story really well!

Dude, don't be sorry. I love the ending, and Sasuke still hearing Itachi and all.

And the KakaRin part was sweet. Sadly, after reading some of Kakashi Gaiden, KakaRin doesn't really strike my fancy; I only semi-liked it because of a few well-written fics.

This is one of them.

I don't know; maybe when the pairing's fandom gets bigger my mind will change. But right now, SasuSaku's back. Huzzah!

Personally, I thought that this was adorable ^^.

I've never seen anything else like this, and I can really see this happening, the girls healing them physically and emotionally, and maybe not mentally but they are trying, and that's what counts, right?

Nice job :D

Loved the story!
I was looking for a KakaRin story before and I was hoping I would find one that had a relation to SasuSaku. I couldnt find any so I gave up and started looking up SasuSaku. Sure enough I found the duo!
I loved the whole 'fated coincidence' thing. It was really cool.
I just finished reading the Kakashi Gaiden and then I fell in love with KakaRin cuz it was so much like SasuSaku. Its like a history thing.

Very good keep up your stories. :D

i was a little confused on the kakashi and rin part, like what all was going on. but this is great writing. You use wonderful words to describe every little detail, such as the surroundings. your vocabulary is amazing as well.

I like KakaRin too (but when there is no Rin, I enjoy KakaAnko).
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I like this story (hopefully, it will make allurement like Sasusaku again. still. whatever.)
I love how they are so similar (I didn't notice it before, and now I am. KakaRin and SasuSaku are same.)
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Meh. The ending isn't too bad. Really! It connected both stories.
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I think you did well on it. :]