Oh my gods! (laughing moutaij gods, lol)

Even though this is the most twisted, evillest fic I ever read that had 13 chapters, it was really good.

I'm probably sadistic too xP

This is good, I guess. There's not really anything I hate about this fic except for... well, I don't hate it, but I spotted a few spelling mistakes and stuff in the earlier chapters.

... Did that sound mean? I'm sorry!

Oh well. Just saying- Dang, this fic is pretty awesome! (And twisted D)

CREEPY. Glad for your realistic ending. Yamato is DEFINITELY the type for that, what with him being almost as emo as Sasuke. LOL Also like the Taishiro hints you dropped. Looking back, I noticed there were like 5 characters TOP in this fic. Really wish you'd used more! Over all, solid fic and I look forward to the Koushiro POV.

COMPLETELY Believable, especially with that Takeru-Kaiser episode.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE Onisan!Its my FAV STORY EVEER!

Okay, here's what I have to say on this story. Personally I like Yamato/Takeru. I won't say you have to, but all I want to know is if you seem to hate it so much, why write it at all? And why take it to this point? Honestly as realistic and understandable as it was...I feel as though you took it a bit too far. Like I said this is all just my opinion but...I really didn't expect to ever see something this fricked up. And I've seen plenty of things, this has to be one of the worst...not because of description, not because of the events...but just because it even exists.

You are sick and twisted to write this fic. It was well writin but sick nune the less and make Takeru the Ki not uke was wrong on so meny levels. On top of that you made him hurt Diesuke I love Takeru/Diesuke. Sorry for flaming but this is the most distubing thing I've ever read and I read a lot of rape fics.

O_O

T_T It's so... Sad... -Sob-

They died... And Takeru...

_ Aw man, you're awesome. You're like, my idol now. And your mom is cool too. I wish I could share my fanfics with my mom. She'd probably stab me though, or throw me out the door.

That was a pwnage fanfic. Awesome. Brilliant.

-Worship.-

SK

OMGOMG!1!

XD It's getting more and more ownage

Haha, crud, I have volunteer workstuffs tomorrow. Ah well, screw that, this is too awesome to save for later!

Oh no! Daisooky! Poor thing.

x_X

SK

Yayayay, XD

idon'tlikeyou.

woo, sesky!

GOD IS YOU! You are amazing, Im going to go pass out now from too much incredibility intake.

YOU ARE A GOD! I usually only review the most recently written but... YOU ARE A GOD!

vert good very dramatic and it was kind of confuseing but it was one of the best so that is all i could say bot very good