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Gear's Girl 6/28/10 . chapter 17
please do continue
brucasfanatic 8/26/09 . chapter 17
So, I think that Jayden really IS God's gift to women. Or he's definitely in first place in the race of gorgeous, perfect men in the world competing for that title. the fact that he wasn't in love with anyone except Brooke is so sad. But, BL are finally friends again! Squees like a fan girl! Just have Lucas and Jayden compete for her or something. I don't mind who wins.

I feel so bad for Nathan. But I'm glad he sent that thank you note to Lucas. Poor Hales. Lucas should give her the note.

UPDATE SOON!
brucasfanatic 8/26/09 . chapter 16
Still loving Jay/Brooke. Damn you for making me love them. Maybe I just miss happy BL? LeSigh. Umm...so, I'm really hoping Nathan is okay. And that we get some good Brooke/Nathan scenes. I almost jumped up in glee when Brooke became involved in the story. I miss their love/hate relationship. 3 Can we have some heart to heart between them please?
brucasfanatic 8/26/09 . chapter 15
You're killing me here. You realize that like, you're making Jayden out to be God's gift to women, right? He bought the flowers and pretended it was Lucas who did so Brooke would be happy, right? And he even noticed her look long enough at a particular colour and painted her apartment! Now I don't know who I want together! UGH!
brucasfanatic 8/26/09 . chapter 14
I feel like a two faced, traitorous slut for saying this, but, I LOVE Brooke/Jayden.

Now I feel like crap.
brucasfanatic 8/24/09 . chapter 13
SUCH an adorable chapter! i mean, dark and moody, but ADORABLE! especially the ending! MORE! MORE!
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 11
That quote at the end was THE BEST quote to fit BL. Not only that but it also contrasted BL with Pucas, which I always love. Great chapter. Love how professional Brooke is. And I'm glad you're not having Giselle turn out to be this psycho bitch, cause that would be too simple.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 10
the way Lucas explained things, Brooke probably thought she was just a rebound. Though, we all know she wasn't. Awe, this is sad. YAY Bevin/Skillz! love the Naley as always. And gah, the Jeyton is amazing.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 9
Well..it had to come out sooner or later. :( I miss BL already. And even though it was difficult, I really really enjoyed the small Nookie scene we got. Why does she hate him so much again? Gah, can't wait. And dammit. Giselle/Lucas are going to go to Brooke, aren't they? ugh.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 7
Awe, is Peyton freaking out? She seems to be freaking out, and wants to hand on to him before she does something she'll regret. As always, the BL is LOVE! Seriously. The dress is red, right? And I swear, the last chapter, I thought he'd invited her to a basketball game. lol Anyways, I knew Giselle was going to want marriage counciling. Mouth will probably mention Brooke to her. ugh.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 6
I love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love, LOVE the parallel between Lucas and Peyton with Lucas and Grace. Like, LOVE it. Especially the part where Lucas says that they're supposed to be epic but they're not. RIGHT. on the money. And oh GOD. She thinks they're going to a ball? Is she going to dress up in an elegant gown and embarrass herself?SO excited!

Now on to my worries: Brooke is a marriage councilor. Lucas' marriage is on the rocks. IS this going to be like The Wedding Planner? Only so, so, so much more emotional? gah.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 5
GAH! I think this is my favourite chapter so far! I loved every single part of it. Even the flashback between Breyton. Love how optimistic Brooke always is. That kiss at the end was perfect.
brucasfanatic 8/23/09 . chapter 4
First of all, GAH! I'M SO HAPPY FOR JEYTON!

Now that we've got that out of the way, I feel bad for Nathan. He looks like some bad ass kid who just doesn't know how to express his true feelings. I think he likes Brooke. A lot. But I hope this ends up being a BL/NH, cause they own. I love love the little BL we got. Please, let them be together already!
brucasfanatic 6/7/09 . chapter 3
Okay, first of all, I have to say that I COMPLETELY empathize with Brooke about losing her purse. Man, I can't count how many times I've forgotten it. Always on a moving vehicle. Once in a grocery cart outside in the parking lot of a wal mart. Open...and it had like EVERYTHING in there. Thank God there are good people in the world...

Next, THIS:

“Apparently you two got engaged last night, and you’re pregnant with his baby!”

was hilarious. Made me laugh out loud. Awe, love the Naley.

Wow...Rachel hates Brooke, huh? sad. YAY Jeyton!

Loved the last BL scene. 3
brucasfanatic 6/7/09 . chapter 2
Awe! They had almost-sex? Fantastic. Cute chapter. And oh, Tim, how I love thee.
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