Just wanted to drop you a note that I really enjoyed this fic--and I'm doubly impressed because I know the time constraints you were under! Nicely done--although this fic is plot driven, there are some nice little characterization touches throughout, and its great seeing a fic with all of Weiss working together well as a team. Now go finish *Seuche*!

Wow, definitely adding this to my reclist. D: Great ending to a great story. Geez, I honestly felt a bit bad for her. But now I wonder what she did to Ken! At the same time the entire fight I was mumbling to myself "you have to sever the neck or remove the head." :D

One nitpick. Generally the preferred term is biokinetic, not biokine. :) But it really just depends on what term you want to use for your story.

You did an excellent job of building up suspense in the beginning. In this chapter I enjoyed Weiss's careful work ferreting out clues. Yay Youji for chatting up the receptionist and stealing a questionaire.

Ah, nice to see another chapter. Man, two doctor exams in one shot! It was a bit nerve wracking. And this Doc Takagawa is so vicious seeming. :D

This is SO fucking good.

excellent. i love that i can't tell what's going to happen next and it makes me anxious for the boys. >_< does that make sense? wonderful depth and detail. waiting eagerly for chapter 3!!

This is very interesting. Your characterization is marvelous, and I absolutely love the way you narrate...this sort of flowy, slightly stream-of-consciousness blend between 3rd person narration and speech/thought. The story is intriguing, and the character interactions are fun. Please please continue.

very great chapter!

This is really good so far. And (sad to say) when I read that this wasn't a romance my smile was about this big... ^_^

I'm all a-flutter over whether or not Aya's going to get effed up by this Amano-sensei. On one hand I agree with Omi that it's prolly the chick, but on the other... Egh, be careful Aya-san! *does nervous dance and handflap*

off to an excellent start the clinic visit is making me extremely nervous looking forward to more

hi! *totally* packed with detail n descriptions. love it! i'm in suspense! lookin forward to your next update. :)