that was really wierd? I mean come on guns kid thorn hating bone phoney killing peaople please this would never happen

Oh.Me Likey. Me Likey very much...

Incredably well writen. I will read the rest later.

Seems kinda morbid, and the characters, especially Thorn, became more and more out of character. Really good though, and well written. The story had lots of action, romance and tragedy...eight out of ten in my books.

Holy **, this is freakin awesome

Wow...
Love the fanfic so far (there should be more bone fanfics...)
Ishmael reminds me of something from an H.P. Lovecraft story.

Wow, you make some long chapters.

Well, it seems that you got the whole Fone Bone-Thorn part of the story down pat, but I'm seen' some holes in the Boneville half.

None of the bones seem surprised that Smiley and Phoney aren't dead after being lost for over a yaer, nor do they care that Fone's gone. Seem a bit suspect to me.

However, the Veni-yan fight was inpressive, along with Thorn's queen-ship (or whatever) being realistically flawed. I've only had time to read the first two chapters, but I'm looking forward to the others.