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Reviews For: The Chronicles of Fone Bone Oathbreaker

*StallanPhantomstar*
2008-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow...
Love the fanfic so far (there should be more bone fanfics...)
Ishmael reminds me of something from an H.P. Lovecraft story.
MysteryPerson0001
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseYOUR A **!
YOUR MOMMA! NOW WHAT?!
SHOULDN'T YOUR MOMMA BE CLIMBING A SKYSCRAPER?!
YOUR MOMMA IS SO FAT, WHEN SHE PASSED IN FRONT OF THE TELEVISION, YOU MISSED 3 SHOWS! YOUR MOMMA IS SO FAT, WHEN SHE WENT TO SCHOOL, SHE SAT BY EVERYBODY! YOUR MAMA IS SO UGLY THAT THE GOVERNMENT COULDNT IDENTIFY HER AND PUT HER IN AREA 51! YOUR MOMMA!
Raxzo
2008-05-11
ch 2,
abuseWow, you make some long chapters.

Well, it seems that you got the whole Fone Bone-Thorn part of the story down pat, but I'm seen' some holes in the Boneville half.

None of the bones seem surprised that Smiley and Phoney aren't dead after being lost for over a yaer, nor do they care that Fone's gone. Seem a bit suspect to me.

However, the Veni-yan fight was inpressive, along with Thorn's queen-ship (or whatever) being realistically flawed. I've only had time to read the first two chapters, but I'm looking forward to the others.
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