This is a great fic.Keep up the good work.Post up a chappie soon please.

This some really good stuff keep up the great work. Plz update soon i cant wait for the next chapter.

if you can check out my fan fic its called Blood Ties. Read and Review plz.

oh and feel free to drop and cool characters you can spare or supernatural concepts it'll help me with my writting

update soon thanks

I like it so far, you're very good with subtleties! I found the dialogue a little confusing in the way it was set up, though; it's a little hard to decipher who exactly is talking. Good job so far, though!

Cute idea! But is Rhys a vampire? I'm sorry, it's just with the category this story is in I have to ask.