 WhiteSparrow 2010-01-04 . chapter 4How can the Hyuuga eyes see so well if everything is blurry and better suited for seeing motion? But still a great read.
Eagerly awaiting for more :) |
 undeadyeti 2009-11-17 . chapter 2Nice chapter have to say this story is looking more and more like you have military or paramilitary experience. funny ending though those traps kinda hurt at least I thought my leg was being pulled out of its socket when my brother did something similar too me. |
 undeadyeti 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Sorry I didn't review this the first time through. I like how you started it with Raidon's pov and how he managed the kids in the auditorium. Very much reminds me of my days in JROTC keep it up. |
 undeadyeti 2009-10-27 . chapter 3I went through similar if less brutal survival training with my father and my JROTC battalion. I'd like to point out land nav sucks especially at night in bad weather. keep it up |
 undeadyeti 2009-10-27 . chapter 4Greatness you are turning a kids show into a military espionage story on level with authors like Frederick Forsyth(day of the jackyl, the odessa file, dogs of war) Please continue your work. |
 obsessiveicequeen 2009-09-09 . chapter 1very interesting: making hinata leader, and this training program. its pretty original compared to wat i read |
 yellulhchicken 2009-08-30 . chapter 4hnn... no bad. not bad at all. |
 Willow-Bee the Cat 2009-06-05 . chapter 4Interesting. |
 tedlay 2009-04-28 . chapter 1update asap |
 kinda evil 2009-02-05 . chapter 4wow, i'm suprised you have such little reviews, its a brill story! It looks like it has alot of promise, although only time and more chapter will tell for sure, so update soon! |
 movintarget 2009-01-20 . chapter 4I'm interested to see how this story continues on. I like what your doing.
-movin |
 Lady of the Hunt 2009-01-20 . chapter 4Now that last bit was definitely a bit creepy visually, awesome story tho!! I can't wait to read more!! :D |
 irritated reader 2009-01-17 . chapter 4I've never read anything like this. I feel like I'm learning right along with them. The obstacles are so creative, and so real--it's like I can imagine this being written by a retired shinobi. And it's been really funny in places, like when Naruto dropped the box of weapons. You've really got his characterization spot on, as well as Hinata's. As for Raidon, I don't know if he's good or bad, but I sure do love him! But what really gets me going is that it's oozing with politics; that really gets me going in a way that the trashy romances that I usually read can't even begin.
Thanks for the great story. |
 Dragon Man 180 2009-01-16 . chapter 4Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see how the final results of this class turn out. Raidou's methods are impressive for soldiers, but will his students still have any humanity after he's done with them? |
 BukkakeNoJutsu 2009-01-16 . chapter 4This is a really cool original idea. I'll be keeping an eye on this. I love the tactical-focus of this fic. |