How can the Hyuuga eyes see so well if everything is blurry and better suited for seeing motion? But still a great read.

Eagerly awaiting for more :)

Nice chapter have to say this story is looking more and more like you have military or paramilitary experience. funny ending though those traps kinda hurt at least I thought my leg was being pulled out of its socket when my brother did something similar too me.

Sorry I didn't review this the first time through. I like how you started it with Raidon's pov and how he managed the kids in the auditorium. Very much reminds me of my days in JROTC keep it up.

I went through similar if less brutal survival training with my father and my JROTC battalion. I'd like to point out land nav sucks especially at night in bad weather. keep it up

Greatness you are turning a kids show into a military espionage story on level with authors like Frederick Forsyth(day of the jackyl, the odessa file, dogs of war) Please continue your work.

very interesting: making hinata leader, and this training program. its pretty original compared to wat i read

hnn... no bad. not bad at all.

Interesting.

update asap

wow, i'm suprised you have such little reviews, its a brill story! It looks like it has alot of promise, although only time and more chapter will tell for sure, so update soon!

I'm interested to see how this story continues on. I like what your doing.
-movin

Now that last bit was definitely a bit creepy visually, awesome story tho!! I can't wait to read more!! :D

I've never read anything like this. I feel like I'm learning right along with them. The obstacles are so creative, and so real--it's like I can imagine this being written by a retired shinobi. And it's been really funny in places, like when Naruto dropped the box of weapons. You've really got his characterization spot on, as well as Hinata's. As for Raidon, I don't know if he's good or bad, but I sure do love him! But what really gets me going is that it's oozing with politics; that really gets me going in a way that the trashy romances that I usually read can't even begin.

Thanks for the great story.

Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see how the final results of this class turn out. Raidou's methods are impressive for soldiers, but will his students still have any humanity after he's done with them?

This is a really cool original idea. I'll be keeping an eye on this. I love the tactical-focus of this fic.