pretty strange naruto fanfic, up until now it is written as if it was to be made safe against ennemies, all is hidden or covertly referenced, nothing is really known about the genin duo

the readers are nearly in the same position as the jounin trying to comprehend the mystery but lacking facts.

original fanfic all-around, darker than the manga and reaching toward "true ninja (stealth and cunning, "not there") " instead of "naruto ninja (flashy and talkative to satisfy the manga/anime format)"

Hi!

And... wow... i like your fic really much and i hope you continue soon... emmmm, please? xD

Greetings! n_n

More please !

Interesting story, please continue.

Btw there needs to be a "your IQ must be at least THIS HIGH" bar for 'reviews', judging from the drivel posted by incompetents like shnnypichu88 and Guest(10/25/2012) - hey idiots, if you don't like a story then why do you keep reading it? This happens in like every fanfic. I suppose since 50% of people are below the average IQ, statistically, they can't help it, but it would be better for them if they stuck to easier reading. Like Dolan or ragecomics. Oh well it wouldn't be without the babbling of retards in the background I suppose.

Great so far. I will check in often for the next chapter. ;)

this story is bad... i have no idea whats going on, you should slow down and be more discriptive

This whole story has been very well written so far, looking forward to reading more.

"Survival training begins in a half an hour, gentlemen. We leave for Mamoru at sixteen-hundred hours sharp!"

ladies and gentlemen?

otherwise good story :D

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4 words...
This is SUPER AWESOME!

I admit, while at the first chapter i wasn't very eager to continue reading the story. But i'm very glad i did.

The story is very complex and well written to the smallest detail. I absolutely love the plot.

Being a romance - genre reader, i've read a lot naruhina. I woul definitely say that the way you developed the closeness between them is different from what i have encountered. It was very refreshing! Although it was subtle, their small gesture of affection thrills me to no end! I keep reading the same line over and over again!

I hope you could update soon and have lots and lots of people to read your story!
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I'm liking this fanfic.

Very interesting start.

I can't wait to see the results of Naruto and Hinata training with Anko as they take the exams.

awesome chapter once again i really enjoy your work this chapter was a great way to relieve the stress of my day today

Glad for the update, even if all we got is more questions and no answers. Looking forward to more answers though

Lost interset after 5 chapters ago and forced the through the whole drag until the end.

The whole thing is sensless and idiotic. Narutos insane behavior just shows how idiotic the Hokage was to assign hapless pre-genin to a known traitor.

And that stupid torture-box thing is shat into like every second chapter without sense and reason.

What a waste of time.