Reviews for Unwritten Chronicles 1: Hope for Us

UNKNOWN 2008-05-17 ch 14, anon.	abusePretty good. You should go over some of your spelling though.
twinsrock 2008-05-10 ch 4,	abuseMysterious but terrific!
twinsrock 2008-05-10 ch 3,	abuseIt's so good! Keep writing!:)
twinsrock 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abuseYour story is so good I'm reading it again! Can't wait for more!
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-24 ch 12,	abusecool chapter, hurry with the next one.
twinsrock 2008-04-22 ch 11,	abuseYour story is good, but it has mistakes. YOUR not going anywhere should be You're not going anywhere. But it is great otherwise!
twinsrock 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseYou rock! Keep writting! YAY! I
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-19 ch 11,	abusecool.
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-17 ch 10,	abusecool.
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-14 ch 9,	abusenice chapter, a bit short, but good.
Rainpath 2008-04-09 ch 8,	abuseThis is very good!
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-03 ch 6,	abusenice chapter, czan't wait for the next one
Wish the Pain Away 2008-04-02 ch 5,	abusenice songs, and chapter
Rainpath 2008-04-01 ch 5,	abuseGood chapter! I loved the songs, too-- did you write them? The only constructive criticism I can think of today is watch the canon characters-- They seemed to be a bit OOC at times.