I'm practically crying now. What a great what-if piece!

Oh... You just made me sad. But, at the same time, that was amazingly good. It really, really was.

Oh... Poor Edward...

Eve

Oh so sad! But very believeable. great job!

Aw, it is a very beautiful story
Makes me like Eddy-Boy a little more. Just a little.
Over all, I liked it very much.

Wow. That was really beautiful and sad. I think it perfectly describes how Edward would feel.