Come on. Please, please give us Travis walking madly in the insane asylum, with your lovely descriptive writing style. I know you can do it.

Pretty please...

Man I loved Origins. This story is definitely going to my favourites! I just love the suspense and how Travis try to remain sane in such an insane world! The battles with the monsters were also given much detail and were very intense.

I'm enjoying this a lot! It feels like I'm actually playing the game, or rather, in Travis's shoes. Please continue! This story is too good to be left on hiatus.

Next chapter will be awesome. I loved the Sanitarium level, and you're a good enough writer to make it awesome.

Don't stop now. I'm anxious to see more of your take on the prequel game. We're almost to the butcher and I definitely want to see that.

Great stuff. Every Silent Hill game should have its own novelization, and now it looks like origins is in good hands.

The story's great! Hope you update it soon^^

the part with the doctor reminds me of sh2, he travis didnt say his name and the doc still knew it, like maria, and the description of the first monster is always the best, this one was good, the mirror segment reminded me of alice in wonderland, update soon...

ooh!
cliffy i see
very captivating
i love it!
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this is one of the best silent hill fanfics i have read
also is the girl going to stay with Travis or was she just an illusion?
and is travis going to meet "Pyrimid Head" or "Red Pyramid"?
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wow, i haven't played origins yet, but this is cool, update soon.

This is really good! It's descriptive without taking to long which is really hard to do. Can;t wait to read the next chapter.