Thank you for this story. It was one of few that I have read that I can actually relate to. I am like Edward in that sense. And, I honestly believe that if I didn't have my husband like Edward had Bella I couldn't hold my light inside. Thank you for making me not feel so alone.

i really enjoyed this.

This was a really good story. I liked this different Edward instead of the usual. Great Work.

I am enjoying the story so far-although I am dying for Edward's POV! ;-)

omg im in love with your story!! love the dinner scene!! sees alomost too personal! haha

I just finished reading your story and I wanted to make a few comments that hopefully will leave a smile on your face.

1. From someone who suffers quite often from depression (although I am considered BiPolar) I actually think you handled Edwards 'condition' with care.

2. Normally when these fanfiction stories start quoting either the movie or the book that is when I loose interest...but the combination of the subject matter of your story, combined with your writing I found it worked well.

So there you have it...my opinion of the story(the plot as well as your writing style) was a breath of fresh air and I thank you very much for the read.

Aw! Thank you for a beautifully written, romantic story! :-)

A lovely story, and I really liked Edward's POV at the end! Thank you! :)

that was so beautiful
you made me cry
you need to understand how incredibly epic that is;
I never cry.
i can't tell you how much i loved this story
*sigh
you are beautiful, wonderful, talented
and oh, i could just kiss you for giving us this
thank you so SO much
oh!
i'm not gonns get over this
so so so so so so so beautiful
you made me scream, pull at my hair, laugh, cry, sigh
i love you
lmao

looking forward to reading and reviewing

awsome story! :D

Great Story i can't wait to read the rest of it !

That was great!
I love how you've really explored the dark side of Edward and the shame of his past that is expressed in the books that a lot of fanfics don't really touch on. It was refreshing to see it as the central crux of the plot (ok... maybe not refreshing as its not exactly light and refreshing subject matter... but you know what I mean... I think).

I look forward to reading more of your work.
-a

Wonderful story... beautifully written!! Thank you! :)

Really enjoyed this story - thank you.