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| jaamiee 2008-07-07 ch 3,  | abuseso my last review was for the first chapter haha i didn't even realize that there were more chapters lol. I love this story & you need to update soon because i really want to know what's going on! :)) |
| jaamiee 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abusei love monica and john to death, along with elliot and olivia, so i love the story. the flashbacks are great :) update soon |
| sn855850 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseI think you have definitely caught my interest! I hope that you continue with the story. |
| icedogfan 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abusei like it! |
| Livvie Benson 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good. I think that putting flashbacks in italics is good. Cause I was kinda getting confused. But I get it. I am already liking the plot of the story. I like how Liv might be going to jail for killing El. Aww. But I like it. And how you had those two as a couple. I love it of course. |
| onetreefan 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseoh... this is so interesting.i can't wait for more |
| EnforcerAndAccuserFan 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIf this is an "X Files" story, will John Munch play a part? He was in an episode of that series (which raises a question or two about the world we live in!). So far, so good. By starting with her incarceration and interrogation, you've captured the reader's interest. No, italics are not necessary. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see where this original plot leads. |
| Rockstargoddess101 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusepost more soon love it |
| iluvstabler 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseGood so far. I like the flashbacks. Ok...maybe you could do flashes to what is currently happening to Elliot... |