Not bad. Although, I'm wondering-do you like Namiku? Because personally, I like Namixas much better, so I'm hoping that's the main pairing rather than *shudder* Namiku.

Anyway, interesting tribe dividements as well. It's odd how Kairi is not part of the group, though. Overall, it's OK, it could use some improvements, though. (Such as no Namiku XD)