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| Graffiti2DMyHeart 2008-07-22 ch 2,  | abuseWow. This is EPIC. Dr. Cox beaing vurnable, plus JD trying to help him was so cute! This is really addicting! Faust |
| isabel 2008-07-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat chapter for a great story! Can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for your talent and efforts! |
| ThexYaoixNinja 2008-07-18 ch 3, | abusePLEASE UPDATE ;_; ~The Yaoi Ninja |
| Bells of Tomorrow 2008-07-18 ch 3, | abuseI was surprised to see an update, but happy. :) Good job, and keep it up! |
| Gwen 2008-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseDoesn't J.D narrate everything? |
| Shrink To Be 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseIt is going well:-D Looking forward to more! |
| Анко) 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, I want more! (; i hope u continue it soon, it`s awesome)) |
| X-term-in-8 2008-04-09 ch 2, | abuseomg, this story is getting off to a realy good start. i really like this. update soon |
| L J Groundwater 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseI like the idea of a different POV to the same thing that we saw in chapter 1. I didn't realize that's what it was going to be, though. We've heard some pretty rough stuff about Perry and Paige's childhoods, this certainly brings it home. Much better with the italics (thanks!)... just watch the shift in POV and tense. Occasionally you dropped from first to third person and present to past tense. But you're doing well here... updating again? :) |
| Bonzodog 2008-04-07 ch 2, | abuseOoh! What an awesome story. What's going on with Perry? Update! Please... |
| Meco-lia 2008-04-07 ch 2, | abusethis is brill1!! hope to read more soon poor old perry! |
| Анка 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, it`s really great! I like this story, the start is really interesting =) |
| CheetahLiv 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! Can't wait to see what the ramifications of JD's actions are...please update fast, and great job with this! :) |
| mudhousejunkie224 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseloved this chapter!! update soon |
| Bells of Tomorrow 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseI like this a lot. The only semi-critical thing I have to say is that Perry's father is already dead, but I say "semi-critical" because I like the idea of Perry being able to shove it in his evil father's face how successful he became in life, so I say go for it. lol |