awesome job. i loved how you made bella a strong independent woman. keep doing what you do,
Hailey
(bookbestie97)

I loved the quote! I loved the tricksters choice! Tamora Pierce is awsome! I love your story. However, parts of it were hard to follow.

AW
THAT STORY WAS BEYOND AWESOME
I LOVE IT
IS THERE A SEQUEL?!
PROBABLY NOT
BUT ANYWAYS
LOVE DA STORY
PLT

i loved this story, it was completly unique and unpredictable a lot of the time so it's awesome! and it was actually interesting enough that even though it was already complete so i wasnt getting emails about chapters i still rembered i was reading it and actually finished it in a few days! so yey for good stories! :)

hey, just wanted to thank u for writing this awesome stoy
i enjoyed it a lot :D
and i LOVED bella in here! she's cool, smart and hilarious, u can't help but love her, my favorite bella so far~

oh, the ending is too sweet!^^ edward is bella's weakness, haha

really great! best story ever! =)

i think bella bit him simple and painfull when done for vengeance!

You should write whos point of view(POV) each chapter is in.
That would make it less confusing.

This was a really good story!

That was wonderful! It left me wanting more of the story. I'm going to continue reading. xD

Rae

i have to say, a sequel to this story would be really good.

I loved it. Great Story.

thanks for writing this...some parts got a bit confusing, especially who was saying what. Usually dialogue passages run into a separate paragraph when the person speaking changes.

Why didn't Edward worry about becoming attracted to a 'boy'?? Didn't he think he was becoming gay, when wishing 'KEY' was a girl?

oops didnt mean to leave so early. anyways, that is so good! you HAVE to (and i mean HAVE to) write another one! you are so talented and the whole time i couldn't tear my eyes away, sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for him to save her. my friend was growling at me for being boring but i absoloutley could not possibly tear my already sore eyes away! thank you thank you thank you thank you! its the best story i have read in a long time. please write another one! oh and you said you wanted a hug so...(hugs) there. have fun! and write another one because...elmo knows where you live! lol

OH MY GOD! HOLY SH*T! HOW THE F*CK DID YOU WRITE SUCH A REALLY F*CKING GOOD STORY?!