i loved this story, it was completly unique and unpredictable a lot of the time so it's awesome! and it was actually interesting enough that even though it was already complete so i wasnt getting emails about chapters i still rembered i was reading it and actually finished it in a few days! so yey for good stories! :)

hey, just wanted to thank u for writing this awesome stoy
i enjoyed it a lot :D
and i LOVED bella in here! she's cool, smart and hilarious, u can't help but love her, my favorite bella so far~

oh, the ending is too sweet!^^ edward is bella's weakness, haha

really great! best story ever! =)

i think bella bit him simple and painfull when done for vengeance!

You should write whos point of view(POV) each chapter is in.
That would make it less confusing.

This was a really good story!

That was wonderful! It left me wanting more of the story. I'm going to continue reading. xD

Rae

i have to say, a sequel to this story would be really good.

I loved it. Great Story.

thanks for writing this...some parts got a bit confusing, especially who was saying what. Usually dialogue passages run into a separate paragraph when the person speaking changes.

Why didn't Edward worry about becoming attracted to a 'boy'?? Didn't he think he was becoming gay, when wishing 'KEY' was a girl?

oops didnt mean to leave so early. anyways, that is so good! you HAVE to (and i mean HAVE to) write another one! you are so talented and the whole time i couldn't tear my eyes away, sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for him to save her. my friend was growling at me for being boring but i absoloutley could not possibly tear my already sore eyes away! thank you thank you thank you thank you! its the best story i have read in a long time. please write another one! oh and you said you wanted a hug so...(hugs) there. have fun! and write another one because...elmo knows where you live! lol

OH MY GOD! HOLY SH*T! HOW THE F*CK DID YOU WRITE SUCH A REALLY F*CKING GOOD STORY?!

OMG!
YOU ARE AMAZINGLY AWESOME! I was soo stuck into it i couldn't get off the computer... you are an amazing writer! thank you thank you thank you, you made my day!
(I love it how Bella is so cheeky and an awesome fighter *tehehe*)
I couldn't stop reading...

question is ranslaw charlie swan? and this is a really good storie by the way

why why why why cant you have more? please please pleae please please. thank you thank you thank you thank you