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| AttheSwamp 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abuse" Yes, my problem indeed, he had been my problem six years ago. Now he was my problem again." LOL - Great observation. At first I thought. "Hold on a moment, I have just read the other story. It was Ziva who shot Ari." But eventually i worked out was going on. You summed up the difficulties in working with somebody you've had a personal relationship with beautifully. |
| BananaXPancakes 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, really nice to read from Jen's POV. Also loved how you incorporated the prompt word into it. I've been trying to catch up with these WWGs for a while, then read this week's and there was Tate :P *dances* Sorry, rambling on. :P ~Beth |
| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! Really insighful into Jenny's character and you write Jen POV so well. Good job. Really loved the ending! Xx |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat chapt. Can't wait for more. |
| aserene 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI have a feeling it will be something she will encounter later, choosing whose side she'll be on. Excellent work. |