That has got to be my seconed favourite fan fic ever. it was totaly awesome and I kept hearing the theme songs in my head beacuse you kept saying them.

This is one of those stories that deffenetely keeps you in the cliffhanger all the way to the end...a two thumbs up type of story. It is incredible to me how perfectly you took the characters personalities and bent them the necessary to fall into the story line without loosing their original concepts. Funny to see Nagisa so getto but as stronger as she had become still she was emotionally fragil to Shizuma's presence...nicely done. Reading this story has made me very happy. Why? Because besides being one of the very few stories that actually go beyond the end of the anime, you took my favorite couple out of the protective walls of Miator's Academy and threw them into the real world. A world where social boundaries do exist, where different situations and circunstances demanded them to make choices that in turn affected their lives either for good or for bad, and where they had to fight for their love...all this made them look more real to me...like it could happen to any couple in real life. Thank you so much for allowing me to read your story I enjoyed it very much...it was an uplifting experience. I wish you the best and I hope to continue to read more of your stories...keep writing and sharing your talent, it's always appreciated and I will be looking forward to it...Bye

WL

I only managed to read the first chapter and couldn't continue. The girls are acting like homeboys with skirts. These girls are daughters of rich and well-off people. They are in school not only to learn subjects, but also how to behave properly in society. It's an embarrassment to the parents if they bring their daughter to a social event and she acts like an uncultured street thug. You probably never read the Stopani novels and don't have a clue how to portray elegance and refinement in each girl's speech and actions.
On a good note, the scene pacing and descriptions are good. Your prose was well written. I just couldn't stand the content.

Nice story LOVE IT!

*sob* so beautiful... im tearing up while eating this asian sweets... its just soo beautiful...

FINALLY... THEY BACK TOGETHER and LOL NAGISA TOOK THE LEAD FOR ONCE... <3

aw such sweet moment between Shizuma and Nagisa *sob*

OMG... Shizuma is very sly and coy... I LOVE HER <3

WO... Shizuma beat his ass down hard... thats my girl

WTF... really you had to do that? sigh reading the next chapter now...

aw the christmas present was soo sweet.. how my Shizuma climb the wall and ask Nagisa to marry her... so beautiful

aw Shizuma is crying... it ache my heart to see that... *sniff sniff*...

its rare to see a initiative Nagisa but not bad... its really cute since its the only solution anyway... but you left us with a surprising ending... "im getting married" i was like WTF... lol go on to next chapter

You story is amazing. It's very realistic, I spend a couple of years in the US in order to learn English, so I feel identified with the characters. I laughed, I cried… you did a great job.

I really would like to translate your story in Spanish, so more people can read it. I am sure they will enjoy it as much as I did.


Best regards,

Someone from Mexico

Having re-read the story and have gone through the reviews, I'm dying of curiosity to know what this fake 19 chapter was all about. All I seem to have gathered was that "a pair was massacred". Given that it was the last chapter not including the epilogue, I'm assuming it was Nagisa and Shizuma that got killed?