I feel bad for the characters in this story, bcuz they gotta do some really good acting to put up with this story!

omg, you are an awful writer! Unless this is AU then they are completley out of character! tip: go watch the last 8 seasons would ya?

still this story is LAME. Kikyo acts nothing like that. and write longer chapters for god's sake!

this was an utterly boring story. and what person will say i love you in that short amount of time?

I like your use of detail in this story. Thanks for telling me about it.

Hi! I read your story like you asked me to. I hope this is the one you were refering to. Anyway, I don't usually like Inuyasha and Kikyo stories, but this one is well written. The only thing I can say about it, is that I would have maybe liked to see the chapters a little longer and to not feel like you can't keep it simple. Simple is okay, just say what you feel. Other than that, it's very good and sounds like a great love story.

Very sweet! I wouldn't usually read InuxKik fics but I'm really liking this one! Good job!!