 hunter.wills 2009-08-09 . chapter 3Please update soon!
This has to be my favourtie Claire/Quil story so far!
:D |
 Qing 2009-01-10 . chapter 3 Hello!
I've just discovered your gem of a story and I really hope that you continue! I can't wait to read what happens next!
;) |
 winky23 2008-12-09 . chapter 3I like it so far. It is different from the other Quil and Clair stories, where she immediately accepts what he is. I like that you made it a little harder for them. Please update soon!!
~Sloan |
 FuNnY cIdE 2008-11-23 . chapter 3Fantastic! I just watched the movie so now I am in an incredible twilight mood...haha! I hope this one comes off hiatus soon because I would like muchly to read some more!
Keep On Writing;) |
 Crushed Peanuts 2008-09-06 . chapter 3I love it how you portrayed the characters. A magnificent job! |
 twilightamor 2008-08-04 . chapter 3This is awesome! Please continue :D |
 CommonSenseless24 2008-08-02 . chapter 3THIS IS BRILLIANT! I NEVER CARED FOR THIS PAIRING, BUT THEN I READ YOUR STORY AND WAS LIKE...wow. bloody...bloody...bloody *insert awesome adjective*
i just got Breaking Dawn and i'm SO MAD! i see what you meant when, in your A/N, you said what you were reading wasn't making you very happy. darn you, bella.
but i decided to focus on the cute Quil&Claire moments in the book and your story. they make me so happy! |
 Amelia Bedelia 2008-07-29 . chapter 3I LOVE that the vampire could multiply! I've never seen that before... BRILLIANT idea!
Also - my favorite quote EVER - “We almost had the real one! If you would’ve let us follow him, Paul and I could’ve caught up to him easy, ripped his smarmy ** apart. But no, Jake says this, Jake says that. When you lost your balls, Sam, that’s what I wanna know.”
Hahahaha! I want to knnow who was talking during that part! It wasn't Sam, Paul, or Jake, and I don't think it would be Quil... my guess is Embry or Seth, and I'm betting on Embry, personally. :) Which is fine by me, because I view Embry as the comedic relief... hehe! :D
Update SOON!
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia |
 LJ'sGotANewPenName 2008-07-29 . chapter 3I really like your version of this story.
The reactions are more realistic, don't get me wrong I love fluffier stories too but this is so amazing in a different way. |
 Amelia Bedelia 2008-07-29 . chapter 2That was... AWESOME! SO INTENSE! :D
What a great fight scene... but not really a fight... Usually the scary scenes where Claire is almost hurt just isn't real enough... But THIS was REAL! You did an awesome job with this! And I LOVED how Quil was incredibly angry with Claire, and then when he was terrified and wouldn't stop shaking until back up showed up... SO good! You did an AWESOME job with this chapter! But my favorite part was that Claire kind-of forgave Quil at the end, and so did he... Not really a formal apology or anything, but they're at the point where they agree to disagree, almost. Sorta. :D
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia |
 Amelia Bedelia 2008-07-29 . chapter 1Aw - Claire's so MAD! I love the start of this story, though - but I'm surprised she took it so badly! But the whole fact that Sam called the boys away right after they told her probably didn't help much... but WOW!
I'm just glad Claire didn't leave and completely desert Quil!
Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia |
 under-raindrops 2008-07-22 . chapter 3This story was one of the reasons that I got an account on this site, so I could know when you updated this. I love love LOVE your writing style; this chapter was fantastic, and well worth the wait. I really like how you're developing the characters; their actions seem real and believable. I think imprinting is such an interesting concept in the Twilight universe, and you're doing a really good job explaining it from the imprintee's point of view. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more!
- Dede |
 bella'amor 2008-07-21 . chapter 3That was very well written. You have chosen a really interesting facet of the whole story, i wouldnt have thought (in so much depth) what it might be like for Claire to have Quil imprint with her, but I am very glad that you chose to write about it. I cant stop reading it, and i cant wait for your next update. Thanks! |
 iLuvMe21 2008-07-21 . chapter 3Great story so far! I thought that it was significant that you addressed Claire's fears towards Quil. It was important that she told him about her true emotions during that suspensful scene. Update soon!! |
 hannahkarina 2008-07-21 . chapter 3This is so well written, I've completely fallen in love with the story. The way that Claire is acting just makes so much sense to me; it wasn`t long before I started to believe that this was actually happening. I can`t wait to see where you take this, and I hope you update soon. Love, H |