This first chapter is like a explanation on why Dante was only a hollow version of himself in DMC2.
;_;
Vergil, I always knew you'd die some horrible death in the abyss...
God, I love that man.
Anyway, thanks for writing this wonderdful peice of angst. I love angst. It fuels me and sick writing. D:

Oh my god! I cried when i read it! Very god fic! I hope the ending will be happy??

I can't wiat to read the next one you read, keep up the awesome work!^_^

You ROCK!
Thanks for fulfilling my request!
I'm very happy that you write about Vergil.
Keep it up!
I think another angst about their childhood sounds good.
Will be waiting for that... (again...)

ZOMG.. I LOVE your angsty! It's sounds perfect. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.

I think another angst about their childhood is an interesting idea.

I have an request or what ever it may called, what about sparda's angst story? It may become a secret revealing fanfic.

Thanks anyway!
I'm looking forward for your Bitter Sweet. 8)

aw [tear]... great job. and thanks 4 the add.

Very good. Very touching. I liked it!

I'm really-really touched.. Please make another angsty one. I like it. Even though it's not healthy for my mind and soul (but I love corrupting them :P)

I'm very touched...
I love how you described Dante's feeling.
There's nothing more I can say.
You're GOOD!
Why don't you try to make one from Vergil's POV?
I'll be waiting for that...

It was a good effort. It could have been longer and it could have been better. Perhaps if you had used italic for Dante it would have gone a bit better. You could also have dragged it a bit more(if you get what I mean), I think it would have been a bit more deep. Over all it was interesting and it touched me ^^

Beaautiful... interesting that you placed the whole thing in 1st person... it makes it all the more engrossing