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karriga
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
great story :D
Lynx
2008-05-30 . chapter 1
AW! omg! I love your fanfic! im gonna have to check on your page to see if you have any more, man, it was short, but awesome nonetheless. Great job and keep it up!
saya-plus
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
the story was really nice. and touching. it was quite funny when u wrote that u had no idea of how to get her parents out of the picture. XD

anyway, later!~ Yoshi Girl
XxBirdxOfxHermesxX
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVED IT...now you need something..like..an epiloge or something
WhiteLilyAngel
2008-04-13 . chapter 1
*CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP* XD yay, a wonderful fanfic. It was beautiful, ^.^ very beautiful. Itachi was just the tiniest bit OOC, but for the better =D It's hard to write a story in such a setting as this, and not be a little OOC.
well, keep it going! I'm looking foreward to ur next story =)
chii tan
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh!

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kya~!
thats such a great story!!
i loved it!

Sasuke was such a great brother!
And neji and them sorta noticed her smiles werent that real...
but then Itachi..and Sakura..! Kya~!

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wow! i loved that story so much!

smiling alot infront of my friends and everything so that noone notices whats behind it.
Only one girl saw how fake my smiles were!
and she's always there for me!
no guy's actually realised yet... haha
guess i have to wait! ><

i loved that story, great ending! and no, it didnt sound rushed, AT ALL!

Im so putting that in my favorites!
giggles9113
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Aw I think it was so Cute !, and actually I didnt really feel it was rushed but of course I was more interested in her and Itachi to really care about anything else ^^ ; good work keep it up - Giggles ~
xxNarutotardxx
2008-04-01 . chapter 1
This was soo cute!
Spaz-chan
2008-04-01 . chapter 1
great story really sweet i like how saskue wont kill itachi andn likes that there dating :)
blossomheartxoxo
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
aww cute ^^
Spazztasticle
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
aw! Thats so cute~ >< I just wanna hug it! And lick it! And keep it as a pet.
CeliaSparrow
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
Aww, that was really cute, write more.
Quiet Moon
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
-sighs- So cute. I liked the brotherly trick that Sasuke played. It was funny seeing Itachi's reaction to that discovery to it...for the fifth time. And no, it doesn't seem rushed. It was very nice.
animehamster
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
Kyaa!! It's such a charming story ... Bah! What am I saying?! It was good though. I must be acting really weird today since it's my birthday... Anyway, nice work. ItaSaku... Not my favorite pairing but a good one.
Bundyangel
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
aww dark-chan! that was so cute and full of fluff! i loved it! >w<

For an Au/ar it was incredibly in character! I love the thought of the uchiha brothers getting marginally along and both supporting sakura. -sighs and clutches hands to chest- its just too cyute~!

thank you so much dark-chan! You should write more itasaku ^_~
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