thank you for updating so soon. This is really getting good :) I can't wait to read more! :D

Care to give me a reason why she has the Grimmerie? Remember "For Good"? Yeah...

Although I'm pretty convinced that's easier to fix with magic when she feels like it...

Hey BL, One thing I suggest you do is double-check the document after uploading them, it tends to double the letters until the first non-alphanumeric symbol.

Also, couple of spelling errors in the earlier chapters, I reccomend cleaning them up.

And if anyone gives ya grief, just let them know it's intended as a webcomic and so odd chapter-layout (Which I would assume the main gripe would be) is because you're thinking in pages.

If I could say anything else, I would say that maybe you should think in chapters as well here, and just keep notes of when one page ends and another begins, so maybe put it in 3 or 4 chapters. I know that chapters 8 and 9 would make more sense as a single chapter.

Okay, I lied, another thing, the Wicked fandom is pretty open to postmusical crossovers. At least, Wolfie's fics didn't get flamed into submission.

I just hope people don't call me plagiarizer when I get No Goodbyes up again. We both wrote multi-crossover postmusicals. I'd just point them to my devart.

good story please update soon. I am now curious whats going to happen next :)

Hey! Guess who!
I read your comic on , and then I found this! Very interesting, to say the least. But, no! There's a cliffhanger! Gargh! Please update soon!

lol! wow that's great! so funny! I've seen both of those plays! great story keep writting!