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| AddictedFanfiction Reader 2005-07-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis story was awsome!! |
| TheEvilAshleyness 2005-02-26 ch 12,  | abusetotally loved it |
| firecat 2002-12-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseHey i loved it all. come out w/ the next chapter soon so i can read it keep on writing |
| Relish Yuy 2002-05-10 ch 4, | abuseokay, I'll give you my real review later, when I finish the entire story. I just had to say this first, lenient means easily done, like a lenient teacher lets you get away with everything, sorry that was just bugging me. Anyways, so far so good!! :) I'll finish reading it this weekend! |
| Silver_Star 2002-05-09 ch 12, anon. | abuseThat was great! I loved it! Please keep up the great work! Silver_Star O_o |
| Kura-sama 2002-04-26 ch 12, | abuseKinda corny...=) but i like it! |
| Stephanie 2002-04-25 ch 12, anon. | abuseHappy Ending! to the point and not to long! good job! I'll be waiting for your next fic! He he he hope its as good as this one! |
| Angel BlueFlame 2002-04-19 ch 12, | abuseKeep it up, Tenoko! We all expect more great fics like this from you... L8r chica! ~*~Angel~*~ |
| Morrighan of Crimson and Sa... 2002-04-16 ch 12, | abuseHe-he.... Good ficcie.... ^_~ Like the transformation Persian Ice was able to go through... Angelia gave him a black eye??? *grins even more* Nice visual.... |
| Artemis Noemi Nightingale 2002-04-16 ch 12, | abuse^_^ Very nice conclusion! Nothing to pose a question, nothing odd, just a nice, normal ending to a wonderful story. I'm glad you decided against my suggestion; this is MUCH better. Nice and short and sweet. O.O Wait a minute! THE STORY'S OVER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S NOT FAIR!!! NOTFAIR!NOTFAIR!NOTFAAAAAAAAIIRR! |
| AzureKitty 2002-04-16 ch 12, anon. | abuseHmmmm... Although chapter 12 is a little short for my liking, it is still a great finish to a great ff! Hat's off to the author: TENOKO!!! ^_^ |
| AzureKitty 2002-04-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis Fic is a MUST-READER! It is Beautifully written so YOU should TOTALLY read it!!! ^_^ |
| Artemis Noemi Nightingale 2002-04-10 ch 11, | abuseAw... Such a sweet finish. I almost cried. And as for what happens... What if, when Persian Ice has the chip removed, he sort of malfunctions and his mind regresses to that of a newborn? And since he's kinda like a robot, his body just sort of automaticly reacts to match his mind, so he's basicly reborn, and doesn't remember anything. Then 'Lena and Hee-chan get married, have a little girl just like 'Lena, who ends up falling in love with Persian Ice, and vice-versa, so everything is all fixed with a happy ending. Or you could just have Persian Ice die when the microchip was removed, but I don't really like that idea... he doesn't deserve to die. But you're the authoress, so you can write anything you want and I'll still be supportive... unless you do something stupid like killin' off one of the pilots as part of the epilogue. -_-v |
| Stephanie 2002-04-10 ch 11, anon. | abuse^_^ YA! happy ending! (sniff sniff) that little last part was so cute! There's nothing like a good HxR fic. as for the ep you should have our favorite couple live happily ever after, etc. and maybe include a right minded P.Ice maybe a forgivness thing or whatever you want to do there! Remember not to over work yourself and take care! ^_^ steph |
| Stephanie 2002-03-30 ch 10, anon. | abuseoh no you just had to stop it there didn't you? Please hurry with the next chapter, I really just gota know what happens! You wouldn't kill them... would you?!? |