so is it the end? or is it not the end? i'm confused. very confused.

WHERE IS THE VAN?? xD it's there. you just don't wanna get in it.

Wow. This was... Pretty intense. I loved it a lot!

Too bad Kiba didn't share how to google stuff like that. I wanna know. >w<b

P.S.: Naruto as Captain Jack Sparrow. EPIC.

Yupp, that robbery lie just called for a heist joke :D

So, Sasuke wasn't feeling sick at the pyramids? I seriously thought there was something wrong with him :S

KIBA LULZ

I need to try drinking tequila like that. It makes the experience even better. :P

lololololol XD Totally got the hawk joke. :DD

M, I wanted to read this since it first showed up on my alert list, but I never actually got around to do it :)

Nice chapter, cute characters and relationships, I really like Shino (I usually don't really like him). That prank, I knew it was a joke, it was so NarutoxKibaxalcohol... Poor Sasuke :(

GUUH.This was worth the wait x'D I've been keeping the tab up forever, but with NANO and all I only had time to read half and then I had to stop in the middle of it and didn't get back until now.. But XDD I laughed out loud at several occasions x'3
I really died at the scene around the table where they're talking about Naruto's mom x'3
And then it was cute how Naruto'd kill for Sasuke, and that sort of reminded me of...was it Animehead who did the fic about the 'corpse' in the trunk? XD

Anyway, the bit in the van.. XD Oh Naruto, you jackass! XD
I wouldn't have minded reading the full version of what happened while they were being taped, but the snippets were hilarious XD Wtf pirates? XD
Guuh, really I think this was a worthy ending to Spring Break. XD It's a feel-good fic indeed. I feel like reading it all in one go now~ *3*

I hope you're having a kickass time in Europe! <3
luff~

...x'D. That was...I... wow. I'm so glad to finally be able to see the end of this story! Curiosity was killing me lol. The pirate thing was... x'D Um, seeing as anything else I say on the content will not be all that coherent since I can't stop laughing, this was awesome. Nice way to end it. x3 Naruto is so freaking sweet...in a gross/adorable/weird as hell way. And Sasuke...words don't apply. xD

Somehow...Yu remain the only person alive who can manipulate my brain into literally wanting to combust in frustration.I want toknow so bad what happens after this chapter i want to dig my eyes out of my skull with a ladel.

I truly admire a relationship where two "straight" ( i put straight in inverted commas in the hope that they are not straight, and ergo; will have a homo-erotic relationship) males can have rampant pirate sex and still be fine with each other. I fonly my straight friends were like that eh? (sigh)

Oh, once again so cleverly written with originality and beauty, you have written a story that will forever cause me pain to think about. I'm just happy they stayed friends, and If you are a decent human being, which you are, ( and then some: you amazing person, you) then you realise that a perfect epilogue to this would be that they proceed to go to Sasuke's house and violate Itachi's bed.

I love you beyond words for being able to write such sinewy gorgeousness! This story both captivates me and makes me suicidal outof frustration.

Richard.

Oh, well...
First of all, i don't really remember all the details from the previous chapters, which means i should probably re-read them before commenting... but because i don't have enough time at the moment, i will just focus on this one, and tell u what's on my mind at the moment.
I remember seeing on ur profile a line, about how u gonna block those who leave u a crap about seme-uke issue.
I got curious, wondered what exactly u meant, and saw a person telling u in a review, how totally big cliffhanger it was that Naruto topped!
It took me a while to stop laughing @ that, really.
Just what kind of people consider something like this a clifhanger?
Damn.

Another thing on my mind is that in my very opinion Sasuke actually likes Naruto as more then a friend.
And Naruto is too oblivious to notice.
Am i right?
Focusing on this:

Sasuke stopped him, grabbing his wrists. “You don’t have to go that far, Naruto. Are you crazy?”

Naruto grinned. “Nah. I’m a bit drunk, yeah, maybe wouldn’t do it otherwise, but who the fuck cares.”

“Maybe that’s the point…” Sasuke mumbled and glanced away. He let go of Naruto’s wrists.

“What?” Naruto stared.

“Nothing… Do what you want.”

I got the feeling that Sasuke actually DOES like him this way.
That's because it once happened to me.
I was in some kind of situation with someone and i said
"Well, i better go" and he said "Okay. If u want to. But are u sure u wanna go in such a moment? I don't mind, but... " And i interrupted with "Exactly" as in i knew he didn't mind, and i wanted him to MIND, to care if it was one way or another.
And that's why listening to Sasuke, it remainded me about that very situation.
When u aren't sure, if u gonna be alright after things like this, because u actually care too much.

I just think that it could work for them to be in a relationship, with Sasuke's “You’re the straightest guy I know.” and Naruto's “I don’t think there’s anything I wouldn’t do for you…”

Oh, another example:
" [...] Just keep your eyes on the TV.”

“Don’t need to,” Sasuke mumbled.

Isn't it like Naruto suggesting for Sasuke to watch heterosexual porn, when he kinda-sorta-admits,he doens't needany extra stimulation?

The all van-thing was creepy but at the same time very HOT in my opinion.
And my fav. line from all the story is probably
“Thanks for… uh… the update,” !


And in the end, i wanted to mention a programm i've seen on tv lately.
The girl had a step-brother, who everybody loved and admired.
She needed money, so she asked him if he maybe could help her, find a job and stuff?
Hesuggested her to sleep with some guy.
She did.
Once.
And the guys recorded all that and have been blacmailing her for some time.
It later appeared that she wasn't even the only one.
The point is, that after some time, she couldn't stend it anymore, and one day her emotions overpowered her, and she killed the guy.
She just didn't have a single person to come to, because noe would even believe her.
All the people considered her the bad one, not the guy.
She regreted what she did, she was under age too, if i remmeber about 17.
What's my point?
That story kind of remainded me about it.
Remainded me how much bad a video like this can do, how much it can hurt.
And i just admire the ability to move on, even laugh it off.
Because there is no other thing u can do about it.
So just let it go.
It's not the end of the world.
I am glad they did so.

That would be all for now.
Have a nice trip, and come back to us soon :)

x

omg. i gotta tell ya. i love how you tied in dane cook's joke at the end of the chapter. delightfully brilliant :)

*Claps maniacally*

THIS is why I read your fanfiction.

Bravo!

how horrible :D

you took out the juicy part lol. But I trully loved the story!

Wasn't what I was expecting to turn out at all.

I think I loved it until this last chapter. Umm... a little more warning than "perhaps hard to swallow" would have been nice, but at least you warned us I guess. Umm... though I commend you for the twist, I totally thought Sasuke would be Seme up until this chapter. I think I'm still in a state of shock... I... *shock*

“…he wouldn’t be bothering to swim with the rest of the primates gathered around the watering hole”<- AHAHAHAHA!
You did such a great job capturing Sasuke’s haughty disdain, yet vague fascination and amusement, with nothing more than descriptive tone and good perspective taking. I really loved the very first scene for the strong personality and voice it carried throughout.

I just about blew coffee all over my keyboard at the line “…because Naruto had sat on them and broken them with his fat ass this morning.”

“getting all pruney and burnt like a couple of suicidal California Raisins” SUCH a good simile.

“Naruto could read him like a book (the kind with pictures anyway)” Damn, your wit is like a razor in this chapter.

I really loved this hilarious, other dimension type plot twist...it was so far fetched that it made total sense, and probably not THAT unbelievable considering what people DO do on Spring Break. Gods, though, having them find out when Kiba Googled it was GENIUS.

You also progressed the drunken debauchery very well. It never once felt unbelievable, and I REALLY loved your description of their first kiss and how uncomfortable they were. You always do such an amazing job with realism.

Thanks for the great read and sorry I didn't review sooner...I had to read it twice! XD